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Wednesday 23 May 2012

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A pitch dark corridor due to an unnoticed power failure.
Groping my way I hear soft panting and a huffy-puffy female voice “...coming, yeah...I’m commiinnng, oh...” .
To avoid embarrassment I speed up.
The lights come on suddenly, revealing an obese woman being pulled by a Lhasa doggy under its need for a walk.

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    1. Thank you Purushotham for 'coming' to my blog:) Plz make it more often:)

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  2. Really!what a disappointment--why did the lights have to return so soon?

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    1. To enable me write it:)
      Thank you Indu!

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  3. It was unexpected. With the beginning, I thought it to be a thriller. Sir, I think you should put those pictures which don't give even a slight hint to readers. You write 55 really well...

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    1. Thanks a whole lot Saru! Glad that you liked it, I'm grateful...

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  4. haha , you and your incredible imagination ,wow !

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  5. That was quite a post :)
    I took to reading it many times before fully understanding it.
    Interesting post!

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    1. Thanks a lot Alcina! Plz keep visiting:)

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    1. Thanks a lot Geeta:) It was meant to be like that:)

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    1. :):)thank you so much for the compliment(it is, for this post):)Bhavana!

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  8. have a look at your Surprise AmitAag....:)

    http://elli-itsmylife.blogspot.in/2012/05/versatile-award-double-treat.html

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    1. Thank you so much Elvira...I'm honored! Thanks again:)

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  9. I am not amused by word"obese" woman. !!!!
    :-(

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    1. I'm sorry, but it had to be like that for the impact and justification, obviously without any ill feelings at all...hope you understand!

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  10. nice........he he he he he he he......

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  11. he he he he :) I like that
    Poor dog :)

    Bikram's

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  12. LOL....funny indeed with anti climax......gud read :)

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  13. was expecting more :) hehehehehhe

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  14. haha not what you thought was coming at all...lol....funny

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  15. Amit...
    Oooooh, I just love a surprise!
    And I love a double entendre!
    Most excellent 55 My Friend
    Thanks for playing, please join us again, and
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

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