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Sunday, 13 May 2012

उनकी अदा...



आज मुद्दत बाद 
उनका यूँ बेसाख्ता
बाँहों में चले आना
लरज़ना  तड़पना 
सिमटना  मचलना
बिफ़रना सहमना 
बिखरना  सिसकना 
कांपना   ठहरना
बहकना  संभलना
कसकना सिहरना
और अचकचा कर
छिटक  जाना
होगी महज़  अदा 
उनके लिए
मेरी तो मगर
जान ले गई !

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28 comments:

  1. ANULATA RAJ NAIR13 May 2012 at 22:50

    :-)

    क्या मौत है.................................

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    1. AmitAag13 May 2012 at 22:53

      काश ...बार-बार आती :)
      Thank you Anu!

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  2. Anonymous14 May 2012 at 00:47

    wah wah....padh ke maza aa gaya!

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  3. magiceye14 May 2012 at 00:49

    wah!!

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  4. Shashiprakash Saini14 May 2012 at 01:17

    सुन्दर

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  5. Sakshi Shioramwar14 May 2012 at 02:14

    Correctly captured the 'Ada'..!!

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  6. A Homemaker's Utopia14 May 2012 at 02:42

    So sweet..:-)

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    1. AmitAag14 May 2012 at 03:19

      Thank you Nagini...glad that you're liking my Hindi
      verses too:)

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  7. indu chhibber14 May 2012 at 04:01

    This ada is a killer!

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  8. Unknown14 May 2012 at 05:26

    this is called cold blooded murder with words ,amazing !

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    1. AmitAag14 May 2012 at 21:11

      You killed me with your warm appreciation:) Thank you Alka!

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  9. Anjali Saini14 May 2012 at 14:18

    Very well written with feel :)
    And I must say you have really good vocab in Hindi.

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  10. Seema14 May 2012 at 19:11

    very romantic....

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  11. Mak15 May 2012 at 10:00

    Very intimate sir.

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  12. Saru Singhal15 May 2012 at 20:31

    Wah Kay baat hai...Bahut sundar :) :) :)

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  13. Rekha15 May 2012 at 23:49

    very expressive:) wah!!

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  14. Neeraj Kumar16 May 2012 at 10:30

    kash har maut itni hi khoobsurat ho...

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