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Monday, 28 May 2012

आलम...



बेपर्दा हुस्न का
जलवा न पूछिए,
रूहानी था बेशक़
पर दिलफ़रेब भी,
इक आफ़ताब सा कौंधा
और मदहोश कर गया!


Translation:

The tremendous beauty
unconcealed, was beyond words.
Doubtlessly Divine..
it also tantalized,
The sudden splendour of a Sun
as if faded intoxicantly!



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38 comments:

  1. Shashiprakash Saini28 May 2012 at 01:50

    बहुत बढियाँ सर जी

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  2. Manav Lalotra28 May 2012 at 02:46

    Good one! thanks for the translation..

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  3. Jayashree Srivatsan28 May 2012 at 02:57

    Nice poem and thanks for the translation, helps to follow the Hindi version better

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  4. indu chhibber28 May 2012 at 06:01

    Take care!

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    1. AmitAag28 May 2012 at 09:11

      I have no tensions with friends like you around!
      Thank you Indu:)

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  5. Neha28 May 2012 at 06:11

    Beautiful lines..

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  6. TTT28 May 2012 at 07:26

    lovely ! your translations are also as b'ful as the original poems !

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    1. AmitAag28 May 2012 at 09:12

      Thank you tangy...glad that you liked the translation too:)

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  7. Maniceet Sahay28 May 2012 at 07:54

    Very nice

    Random

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  8. Unknown28 May 2012 at 11:19

    kaya baat hai :)

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  9. magiceye28 May 2012 at 21:12

    :) brilliant!

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  10. Panchali28 May 2012 at 21:20

    Intoxicating.....:)))))

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  11. Mak29 May 2012 at 00:06

    Beparda husn ka jalwa na poochiye... kya baat hai sir. Chaagaye aapto. Wow..

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  12. Saru Singhal29 May 2012 at 07:40

    Mazza aa gaya! Aap hindi mein bahut umdah likhte hai:)

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    1. AmitAag29 May 2012 at 20:52

      ...mujhe bhi mazaa aa gaya, Saru, aapke comment se likhne ka behtareen inaam mil gaya:) Thanks a lot:)

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  13. Bikram29 May 2012 at 09:32

    oooh wowo now that is how do i say EXOTIC

    Bikram's

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    1. AmitAag29 May 2012 at 20:53

      Thanks a lot Bikram, I'm delighted:)and grateful:)

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  14. Puru@ShadowsGalore29 May 2012 at 09:39

    wah wah ! :)

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  15. Ranjana's craft blog29 May 2012 at 11:15

    Beautiful..Hindi is very difficult for me to understand..its good that you are translating it...

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    1. AmitAag29 May 2012 at 20:54

      Thank you Ranjana...glad that you liked it:)

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  16. RANDYNAMIC AVANISH29 May 2012 at 23:47

    hey very well written...you know like it was written for someone you just saw walking down the street and there was this curiosity which you have generated in your readers through your words...and translation nice idea..!!!!

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    1. AmitAag30 May 2012 at 00:02

      Welcome here Avanish, and thank you for liking it:)

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  17. V. Khawani30 May 2012 at 01:43

    bahut khub !

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  18. AmitAag30 May 2012 at 01:57

    Thank you V.Khawani!

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  19. A Homemaker's Utopia30 May 2012 at 03:17

    Lovely..:-)

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  20. muni1 June 2012 at 04:22

    nice lines......

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