Both/and, yes? We used to call how literature shows the weather reflecting human emotions "the pathetic Fallacy"--but maybe nature responds first and that gets in our bones? I like how you move from a naughty teasing to the pain.
Oh wow! I'm delighted..The very mention of Pathetic Fallacy with reference to my poem, howsoever remotely, elevates it:) Thanks a lot Susan:)
PS: Glad that you noticed the connect between naughty teasing and pain, and mentioned it too:):)
The wind, chime and speaker's emotion beautifully mingles.
Thanks a lot Sumana for liking my poem:) Glad..!
We do perceive the world around us with what we feel. I liked how well you have captured your current emotion by describing the nature around you.
Glad you liked my poem Namratha:) Thank you:)
I love the idea of the wind and chime feeling the absence.
Glad you liked the thought behind my poem Sherry:) Thank you:)
Thank you Roger:) Happy to see that you liked:)
Glad you liked my poem Geeta ji :) Thank you:)
Amit, I tried to email you but the address was not recognized. Would you please email me at email@example.com ? I have a question! Thanks!
Oh I'm sorry to know that..I have sent you an email and look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you Sherry:)
Missing a loved one is so terrible...Nice words. M for Mexican, Mocktails, Mall...& many more :)- Anita
Glad you liked my words Anita:) Thank you:)
Nice to read
Thank you Rupam:) Glad you liked:)
Touched my heart,can relate with the poem very deeply,very nice presentation.
Oh wow..I'm happy to see that my poem struck a chord in your heart and it resonates..Thank you Jyotirmoy:)
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Thank you Melody:) You too:)
Brilliant lines, and I agree about the pathetic fallacy, as well as the personification in:'The wind is naughty today againfeebly teasing sometimesuncouthly caressing the chime'.I love the final lines:'They feel your absenceand miss you perhaps.Or do I?'
Glad you liked the thought and words, Kim:) Thank you:)
Expression of pain with beautiful lines. It gives happiness to see your return on blogosphere.
Thank you for liking my poem, and your love, Neeraj:)
Love and longing are expressed in our minds by our observance of everything around us now that our loved one is not with us. It is as though we need to talk to and hear the words of things still with us for assurance that all will be well. What beautiful words you have written.
I'm glad that you liked my poem Robin sir:) Thanks and regards:)
Seeing you after quite a while. Glad too.
Same here, dear, thank you:)
We are wind and chimes. Wonderful poem, Amit!
Glad you liked, Sara, thank you:)
Good to see you back!
:) Thank you Deepak sir:)
Thank you Rajeev:)
Those lines and that picture -- goose bumps inducing combo. :)Lovely, Amit. :)
Oh I was waiting for someone to mention the pic.. glad you did, Divya, thanks a lot:):)
Plaintive image and poem. Hope all's well. :-)
All well Susie, thank you:)
What you are feeling is what you are seeing around you.. Piche mudke to dekho, main khadi hu ;)
What a familiar view, what a wonderful sound of the chimes... even far away but a single thought can bring us back there in an instant. Thanks for sharing your memories and your feelings, Amit