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Wednesday, 24 October 2018

Coma

                                                     
                                                     
                                                               Memories’ quartz
Dust of time,
Quiet flows
Rivulet of images,
Ardours plash
And feelings gale,
Dreams murmur
Desires stretch.
Between us but
Icicles in coma!


(Image by Google)

Linked to: Poets United: Winter

24 comments:

  1. When icicles come between lovers, there's little left to do but flee the relationship.

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    1. Icicles form, but melt too..One has to wait!
      Thank you for reading and your comment:)

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  2. Yes, they do melt....my poem wrote about just that!

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  3. Oh, the icicles are indeed like coma, which provide a brief pause or space before continuance. I liked the slow build-up of images and emotions. I also admire the bit about the desires stretching.
    -HA

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  4. Icicles are water in coma! Yet there is much flow and plash in these images.

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    1. 'water in coma' is another interesting thought!
      Thank you for liking my images Susan:)

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  5. icicles and coma a nice parallel. Nice One

    much love...

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  6. As those icicles melt so too does love which trickles away from us until we are alone.

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    1. We are alone and lonely all the time..it's just a matter of realization, when!
      Thank you Robin sir for sharing your thought:)

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  7. Great imagery. I especially love the sounds in your poem, Amit:
    'Ardours plash
    And feelings gale,
    Dreams murmur'.

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    1. Oh, that is my favorite too:) Thank you for liking it Kim:)

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  8. Written beautifully, Amit. Wait for those melting icicles!

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  11. Evocative! I like this and the illustration is a perfect match.

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