When icicles come between lovers, there's little left to do but flee the relationship.
Icicles form, but melt too..One has to wait!Thank you for reading and your comment:)
Yes, they do melt....my poem wrote about just that!
Thank you for your nod Sherry:)
Oh, the icicles are indeed like coma, which provide a brief pause or space before continuance. I liked the slow build-up of images and emotions. I also admire the bit about the desires stretching.-HA
Glad you liked, Anmol, thank you:)
Icicles are water in coma! Yet there is much flow and plash in these images.
'water in coma' is another interesting thought!Thank you for liking my images Susan:)
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Glad you liked, Gillena, thank you:) Love..
As those icicles melt so too does love which trickles away from us until we are alone.
We are alone and lonely all the time..it's just a matter of realization, when!Thank you Robin sir for sharing your thought:)
Great
Glad you liked, Rupam, thank you:)
Great imagery. I especially love the sounds in your poem, Amit:'Ardours plashAnd feelings gale,Dreams murmur'.
Oh, that is my favorite too:) Thank you for liking it Kim:)
Written beautifully, Amit. Wait for those melting icicles!
Glad you liked, Sara, thankyou:)
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Evocative! I like this and the illustration is a perfect match.
When icicles come between lovers, there's little left to do but flee the relationship.
ReplyDeleteIcicles form, but melt too..One has to wait!
DeleteThank you for reading and your comment:)
Yes, they do melt....my poem wrote about just that!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your nod Sherry:)
DeleteOh, the icicles are indeed like coma, which provide a brief pause or space before continuance. I liked the slow build-up of images and emotions. I also admire the bit about the desires stretching.
ReplyDelete-HA
Glad you liked, Anmol, thank you:)
DeleteIcicles are water in coma! Yet there is much flow and plash in these images.
ReplyDelete'water in coma' is another interesting thought!
DeleteThank you for liking my images Susan:)
icicles and coma a nice parallel. Nice One
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Glad you liked, Gillena, thank you:) Love..
DeleteAs those icicles melt so too does love which trickles away from us until we are alone.
ReplyDeleteWe are alone and lonely all the time..it's just a matter of realization, when!
DeleteThank you Robin sir for sharing your thought:)
Great
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked, Rupam, thank you:)
DeleteGreat imagery. I especially love the sounds in your poem, Amit:
ReplyDelete'Ardours plash
And feelings gale,
Dreams murmur'.
Oh, that is my favorite too:) Thank you for liking it Kim:)
DeleteWritten beautifully, Amit. Wait for those melting icicles!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked, Sara, thankyou:)
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Evocative! I like this and the illustration is a perfect match.
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