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Sunday, 4 March 2018

क्रश / Crush



मन एकाकी प्यासा
मौसम की अठखेलियाँ
मैं  हूँ इन पर मरता

Ache lonely listless
Tantrums of Elements
I adore You!



*True that tantrums and  अठखेलियाँ  are not synonymous but a mere translation couldn’t have replaced the other here..


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26 comments:

  1. indu chhibber4 March 2018 at 17:23

    Koi toh chahiye lagavat ke liye.

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    1. Amit Agarwal4 March 2018 at 21:54

      Ji, bilkul sahi! Khaas taur se jab dil ho labrez..Koi aur nahi toh mausam hi sahi:) Thankyou Indu ma'am:)

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  2. दिगम्बर नासवा4 March 2018 at 20:52

    बहुत खूब ...
    मौसम से जुड़े हाइकू .... सब मरते हैं मौसम पे ...

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    1. Amit Agarwal4 March 2018 at 21:56

      क्षणिका पसंद करने के लिए शुक्रिया दिगम्बर साहब:)

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  3. Bikramjit Singh Mann5 March 2018 at 03:43

    :) and I adore you for writing such lovely Haiku's :)

    Bikram's

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    1. Amit Agarwal5 March 2018 at 05:11

      I adore you too for your love and support Bikram sir:) Thank you!

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  4. hyperCRYPTICal5 March 2018 at 05:37

    Love does that.
    Anna :o]

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  5. Uppal5 March 2018 at 07:15

    Elevating!

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    1. Amit Agarwal5 March 2018 at 22:49

      Glad you find it so, Uppal ma'am:) Thankyou:)

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  6. राजीव कुमार झा 5 March 2018 at 20:04

    बहुत सुंदर.

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  7. Jyotirmoy Sarkar8 March 2018 at 06:54

    Superb one, in short told a nice and deep thought.

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  8. pushpendra dwivedi9 March 2018 at 00:33

    very nice

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  9. Jyoti Dehliwal9 March 2018 at 01:52

    बहुत बढ़िया।

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  10. Maniparna9 March 2018 at 11:44

    Superb. It feels great to read your amazing haiku poems after a long time.
    :-)

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  11. Yogi Saraswat10 March 2018 at 01:12

    आज मौसम बड़ा बेईमान हो गया ....और इस बेईमान मौसम को बढ़िया रंग दे दिए आपने अमित जी !! शानदार

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    1. Amit Agarwal10 March 2018 at 03:30

      आपका कमेंट शानदार:) शुक्रिया योगेंद्र:)

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  12. Renu Vyas30 April 2018 at 17:47

    Mausam ki athkeliyon pe kon nahi marta..lovely !

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  13. Amit Agarwal2 May 2018 at 00:31

    Long time Renu ji..Thankyou!💐

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  14. TTT25 May 2018 at 21:56

    First of all congrats!!! Got to know about your book today ! Looking forward to reading the book ....

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  15. Amit Agarwal27 May 2018 at 21:59

    Hey Tangy! Long time..
    Thank you for dropping by:):)

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