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Sunday, 4 March 2018

क्रश / Crush



मन एकाकी प्यासा
मौसम की अठखेलियाँ
मैं  हूँ इन पर मरता

Ache lonely listless
Tantrums of Elements
I adore You!



*True that tantrums and  अठखेलियाँ  are not synonymous but a mere translation couldn’t have replaced the other here..


27 comments:

  1. Koi toh chahiye lagavat ke liye.

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    1. Ji, bilkul sahi! Khaas taur se jab dil ho labrez..Koi aur nahi toh mausam hi sahi:) Thankyou Indu ma'am:)

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  2. बहुत खूब ...
    मौसम से जुड़े हाइकू .... सब मरते हैं मौसम पे ...

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    1. क्षणिका पसंद करने के लिए शुक्रिया दिगम्बर साहब:)

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  3. :) and I adore you for writing such lovely Haiku's :)

    Bikram's

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    1. I adore you too for your love and support Bikram sir:) Thank you!

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    1. Glad you feel so Anna:) Thankyou:)

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    1. Glad you find it so, Uppal ma'am:) Thankyou:)

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  6. Superb one, in short told a nice and deep thought.

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  7. बहुत बढ़िया।

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  8. Superb. It feels great to read your amazing haiku poems after a long time.
    :-)

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    1. Thankyou Maniparna:) Glad you liked:)

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  9. आज मौसम बड़ा बेईमान हो गया ....और इस बेईमान मौसम को बढ़िया रंग दे दिए आपने अमित जी !! शानदार

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    1. आपका कमेंट शानदार:) शुक्रिया योगेंद्र:)

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  10. Mausam ki athkeliyon pe kon nahi marta..lovely !

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  11. Long time Renu ji..Thankyou!💐

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  12. First of all congrats!!! Got to know about your book today ! Looking forward to reading the book ....

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  13. Hey Tangy! Long time..
    Thank you for dropping by:):)

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