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Tuesday 3 November 2015

अक्सर..


मेरा होना है
तुम्हारी हँसी की रौशनी,
तुम्हारा होना
मेरे अँधेरे की उदासी;
मेरा अँधेरा तुम्हारी रौशनी को
ढँक लेता है अक्सर.

Your mirth is a light caused by my presence (in your life)
Your absence (in my life) is my darkest gloom
(your) light is often overpowered by (my) darkness...

(The happy moments are mostly shadowed by sad ones)




25 comments:

  1. haanji bahut khoob.. zindagi shayad yahi hai ab mere liye .. I guess god's will ..


    Bikram's

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    1. shukr hai its only aksar:) Thank you Manisha:)

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  3. How about this Amitji ...keeping the same essence

    Gloom of your absence
    In my mind clouds your sunshine smile
    Blooming in my eyes

    wanted to use the word 'sometimes' but that increases syllable count.

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    1. Absolutely wonderful, Somali!
      Thank you for this value addition:)

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  4. its nice, par aap hamesha sad vala kyun likhte hain?

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    1. Nahin aisa 'hamesha' nahin hota, 'aksar' zaroor hota hai:) Happy waale bhi hain, lekin kam:)
      Thank you Harshita for your interest:)

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  5. unki roshni ki bhi baari aayegi aapke andhere ko bagane ka :)

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  6. very nice ,thode shabdon men ek puri kahani kah jana- apki khubi hai

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  7. Good interplay of words illustrating an imagery

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  8. The vish and shiv both reside within us.....yet we seek outside!!

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  9. The vish and shiv both reside within us.....yet we seek outside!!

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  10. True...naasamajh hain hum! Thank you Geetashree:)

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