hmmmmm BEAUTIFULLLLLLL.. Shola to paaji hamesha hai dil me ... :) Bikram's
Yes boss, hai tabhi toh lapak uthta kai;) Thank you sir:)
Bahut Khoob...
Thank you Prasad:)
Beautiful
Thank you Rupam:)
Good one.
Thank you Indrani:)
Wonderful and evocative
Thank you Suresh:)
Wah bhai wah!
Thank you Deepak:)
Kuch yaadien mein bahut taquaat hoti hai....jab bhi aaye, dil mein hulchul aur toofan macha de te hai. Lovely image and lines!
Exactly! Thank you Lata:)
beautiful
Thank you Geeta:)
Nice one sir... :)
Thank you Yogesh:)
Beautiful ! Emotion - passion, nostalgia . Syllable 5-7-5. :)
Thank you Somali:) 5-7-5:)
Nice one.
Thank you Rajesh:)
Embalming memories and an inflamed heart.....contradiction is the essence of haiku... at the same time its oxymoronic by the very virtue of its paradoxical nature!!
Wow... What a scholarly analysis! Thank you Geetashree:)
Hmmm,होता हैएक पुराना गाना याद आ गया :) शोला जो भड़के, दिल मेरा धड़केदर्द....;)
Ha ha:) Lovely song...And your having left it incomplete says it all;)Thank you Manisha:)
So beautifully expressed!
Thank you Purba:)
बहुत खूब !
Thank you Rajeev:)
एक शोला है जो भड़के किसी के दाह में ,वाह
This too is another view!Thank you Harshita:)
its a beautiful picture :)and i believe your lines too. :)A Rat's Nibble
Glad you liked the picture too:) and mentioned it:)Thank you Meera:)
Beautiful as usual :)
Thank you Renu:)
The line of demarcation between a short verse and haiku is so thin and blurred.....
hmmmmm BEAUTIFULLLLLLL.. Shola to paaji hamesha hai dil me ... :)
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Yes boss, hai tabhi toh lapak uthta kai;) Thank you sir:)
DeleteBahut Khoob...
ReplyDeleteThank you Prasad:)
DeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you Rupam:)
DeleteGood one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani:)
DeleteWonderful and evocative
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh:)
DeleteWah bhai wah!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteKuch yaadien mein bahut taquaat hoti hai....jab bhi aaye, dil mein hulchul aur toofan macha de te hai. Lovely image and lines!
ReplyDeleteExactly! Thank you Lata:)
Deletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you Geeta:)
DeleteNice one sir... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogesh:)
DeleteBeautiful ! Emotion - passion, nostalgia . Syllable 5-7-5. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Somali:) 5-7-5:)
DeleteNice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajesh:)
DeleteEmbalming memories and an inflamed heart.....contradiction is the essence of haiku... at the same time its oxymoronic by the very virtue of its paradoxical nature!!
ReplyDeleteWow... What a scholarly analysis! Thank you Geetashree:)
DeleteHmmm,होता है
ReplyDeleteएक पुराना गाना याद आ गया :)
शोला जो भड़के, दिल मेरा धड़के
दर्द....;)
Ha ha:) Lovely song...
DeleteAnd your having left it incomplete says it all;)
Thank you Manisha:)
So beautifully expressed!
ReplyDeleteThank you Purba:)
Deleteबहुत खूब !
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajeev:)
Deleteएक शोला है जो भड़के किसी के दाह में ,वाह
ReplyDeleteThis too is another view!
DeleteThank you Harshita:)
its a beautiful picture :)
ReplyDeleteand i believe your lines too. :)
A Rat's Nibble
Glad you liked the picture too:) and mentioned it:)
DeleteThank you Meera:)
Beautiful as usual :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Renu:)
DeleteThe line of demarcation between a short verse and haiku is so thin and blurred.....
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