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Wednesday 30 September 2015

शोला



       इक शोला सा
   लपके है दिल में
   किसी याद से                                                                 

37 comments:

  1. hmmmmm BEAUTIFULLLLLLL.. Shola to paaji hamesha hai dil me ... :)

    Bikram's

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    1. Yes boss, hai tabhi toh lapak uthta kai;) Thank you sir:)

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  2. Kuch yaadien mein bahut taquaat hoti hai....jab bhi aaye, dil mein hulchul aur toofan macha de te hai. Lovely image and lines!

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  3. Beautiful ! Emotion - passion, nostalgia . Syllable 5-7-5. :)

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  4. Embalming memories and an inflamed heart.....contradiction is the essence of haiku... at the same time its oxymoronic by the very virtue of its paradoxical nature!!

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    1. Wow... What a scholarly analysis! Thank you Geetashree:)

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  5. Hmmm,होता है

    एक पुराना गाना याद आ गया :)
    शोला जो भड़के, दिल मेरा धड़के
    दर्द....;)

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    1. Ha ha:) Lovely song...
      And your having left it incomplete says it all;)
      Thank you Manisha:)

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  6. एक शोला है जो भड़के किसी के दाह में ,वाह

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    1. This too is another view!
      Thank you Harshita:)

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  7. its a beautiful picture :)
    and i believe your lines too. :)
    ​​A Rat's​​ Nibble
    ​​

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    1. Glad you liked the picture too:) and mentioned it:)
      Thank you Meera:)

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  8. The line of demarcation between a short verse and haiku is so thin and blurred.....

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