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Wednesday, 2 September 2015

तोहफ़ा


ज़ख़्म हरा भी है
और गहरा भी
दिया तो था तुमने
पर है सिर्फ़ मेरा ही

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45 comments:

  1. Yogi Saraswat2 September 2015 at 22:49

    ​बहुत शानदार !!

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  2. Indrani2 September 2015 at 23:52

    Often true! :)
    Could relate to this.

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  3. shraddha singh2 September 2015 at 23:57

    Wow!!! Just four lines but remarkable.

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  4. Cifar2 September 2015 at 23:59

    sacha aashiq gham ko bhi tohfe ki taraf leta hai, wah shaandaar

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  5. C Suresh3 September 2015 at 00:12

    Wow! Ironical and so true

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  6. RAKESH KUMAR SRIVASTAVA 'RAHI'3 September 2015 at 00:18

    सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति !

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  7. Unknown3 September 2015 at 00:54

    This is electrifying....what an expression of love!

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  8. Uppal3 September 2015 at 04:05

    Kya baat hai! :-)

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  9. Unknown3 September 2015 at 05:26

    wah wah... chooo gayi... :-)

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  10. Unknown3 September 2015 at 05:41

    sach kaha....zakhmon ko baat kar milega sukoon nahi....bohot badhiya Amitji

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  11. Unknown3 September 2015 at 06:26

    Bahut Badiya, Amitji.

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  12. Bikram3 September 2015 at 07:28

    haanji aur Ab iska Ilaaj bhi hai sirf MERE paas :)

    Bikram's

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  13. Maniparna3 September 2015 at 10:03

    Such amazing expression in so few words!...wonderful.... :-)

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  14. Purba chakraborty3 September 2015 at 10:28

    Beautiful words :)

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  15. Rajesh3 September 2015 at 12:40

    Very nice.

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  16. Panchali3 September 2015 at 13:35

    ohhh....kya baat!....beautiful !!!

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  17. M S Mahawar3 September 2015 at 19:19

    Bahut Khoob Kaha!

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  18. Manisha Sharma4 September 2015 at 02:02

    Very touchy

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  19. indu chhibber4 September 2015 at 04:06

    Mat rakho sambhal ke,lauta do use.

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    1. Amit Agarwal4 September 2015 at 10:28

      Kaash ki aisa ho pataa:(
      Thank you Indu ma'am:)

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  20. Saru Singhal4 September 2015 at 08:06

    Pain, longing and love with a sprinkle of beautiful writing.

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  21. Unknown4 September 2015 at 20:14

    A profound truth beautifully penned

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    1. Amit Agarwal4 September 2015 at 22:58

      Thank you Lata:)

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    2. D.Nambiar5 September 2015 at 18:45

      When I saw the 'tohfa' I didn't expect this. But I see what you mean.
      There's so much beauty in your lines, Amit. :)

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    3. Amit Agarwal7 September 2015 at 01:06

      Thank you Divya:)

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  22. vanderloost2 December 2015 at 02:15

    Pain is a reaction. It can never be gifted....

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