What a thought!!You dig deep into emotions.
YOU dug deep into my writing, Indu ma'am:) and saw it...likhna saphal huaa:) Thank you so much:)
ohh y so sad amit sir .. take care Bikram's
I'm fine bro...not sad when you're with me;) Thank you:)
Kya baat hai. Poignant but beautiful.
Thank you Saru for your kind words:)
Beautiful lines!
Thank you Madhusudan:)
वो मेरा है या नहीं?इस उलझन मेंखुद के साये पर भी शक करते हैवो मेरा है या नहीं?
Woh mere saath nahi hai...is for sure, kyonki mera sayaa hi mere saath nahi hai..!Thank you Manisha:)
Too much of loneliness.Great read.
Thank you Indrani:)
Sometimes we all reach that tipping point. We all come back too. Nice write
Thank you Shamsud:)
Wah bhai wah!!
Thank you Deepak:)
Very nice......heart touching.
Thank you Shraddha:)
Bahut khoobsurati se tanhaai ko pesh kiya hai aapne Amit ji. Jab saya bhi na raha toh bacha kya?
Thank you Somali:)
Bahut dino baad yaha se guzri.. aur ek bar fir aapki kavita dil ko bha gayi...
Thank you Namrata:)
Sayaa bhi roshni mein hi saat deta hai. Teek hi kahaa logon ne ki sukh ke kayi saathi, dhukh mein na koi - sayaa bhi nahin!
Thank you Suresh:)
So intense! Soul piercing lines
Thank you Purba:)
Amit, very sad but reflective of how we all feel sometime or the other
Thank you Lata:)
wah Amitji, dil ko chhu gayi shayri :)
Thank you Shweta:)
गज़ब के शब्द अमित जी !
Thank you Yogendra:)
heart touching words -Amit ji
Thank you Geeta:)
बहुत सुंदर पंक्तियाँ.
Thank you Rajeev:)
Sometimes every one feels like this!
True! Thank you Uppal ma'am:)
Emotions at their best, you have a way with words :)
Thank you Alok:)
Thank you Ananya:)
beautiful line...Short Story
Thank you M:)
Isolation is the bane of urban survival...
What a thought!!You dig deep into emotions.
ReplyDeleteYOU dug deep into my writing, Indu ma'am:) and saw it...likhna saphal huaa:) Thank you so much:)
Deleteohh y so sad amit sir ..
ReplyDeletetake care
Bikram's
I'm fine bro...not sad when you're with me;) Thank you:)
DeleteKya baat hai. Poignant but beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru for your kind words:)
DeleteBeautiful lines!
ReplyDeleteThank you Madhusudan:)
Deleteवो मेरा है या नहीं?
ReplyDeleteइस उलझन में
खुद के साये पर भी शक करते है
वो मेरा है या नहीं?
Woh mere saath nahi hai...is for sure, kyonki mera sayaa hi mere saath nahi hai..!
ReplyDeleteThank you Manisha:)
Too much of loneliness.
ReplyDeleteGreat read.
Thank you Indrani:)
DeleteSometimes we all reach that tipping point. We all come back too. Nice write
ReplyDeleteThank you Shamsud:)
DeleteWah bhai wah!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteVery nice......heart touching.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shraddha:)
DeleteBahut khoobsurati se tanhaai ko pesh kiya hai aapne Amit ji. Jab saya bhi na raha toh bacha kya?
ReplyDeleteThank you Somali:)
DeleteBahut dino baad yaha se guzri.. aur ek bar fir aapki kavita dil ko bha gayi...
ReplyDeleteThank you Namrata:)
DeleteSayaa bhi roshni mein hi saat deta hai. Teek hi kahaa logon ne ki sukh ke kayi saathi, dhukh mein na koi - sayaa bhi nahin!
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh:)
DeleteSo intense! Soul piercing lines
ReplyDeleteThank you Purba:)
DeleteAmit, very sad but reflective of how we all feel sometime or the other
ReplyDeleteThank you Lata:)
Deletewah Amitji, dil ko chhu gayi shayri :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shweta:)
Deleteगज़ब के शब्द अमित जी !
ReplyDeleteThank you Yogendra:)
Deleteheart touching words -Amit ji
ReplyDeleteThank you Geeta:)
Deleteबहुत सुंदर पंक्तियाँ.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajeev:)
DeleteSometimes every one feels like this!
ReplyDeleteTrue! Thank you Uppal ma'am:)
DeleteEmotions at their best, you have a way with words :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Alok:)
DeleteThank you Ananya:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful line...
ReplyDeleteShort Story
Thank you M:)
DeleteIsolation is the bane of urban survival...
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