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Friday, 4 September 2015

मेरा साया


या तो  बीच-दुपहरी   है
रौशनी  तेरे तसव्वुर की,
या फिर  रात-अमावस
सियाही तेरी चाहत की,
जो भी हो बिलकुल तनहा हूँ मैं
मेरा साया भी  मेरे साथ नहीं...!

45 comments:

  1. What a thought!!You dig deep into emotions.

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    1. YOU dug deep into my writing, Indu ma'am:) and saw it...likhna saphal huaa:) Thank you so much:)

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  2. ohh y so sad amit sir ..

    take care
    Bikram's

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    1. I'm fine bro...not sad when you're with me;) Thank you:)

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  3. Kya baat hai. Poignant but beautiful.

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  4. वो मेरा है या नहीं?
    इस उलझन में
    खुद के साये पर भी शक करते है
    वो मेरा है या नहीं?

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  5. Woh mere saath nahi hai...is for sure, kyonki mera sayaa hi mere saath nahi hai..!
    Thank you Manisha:)

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  6. Too much of loneliness.
    Great read.

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  7. Sometimes we all reach that tipping point. We all come back too. Nice write

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  8. Bahut khoobsurati se tanhaai ko pesh kiya hai aapne Amit ji. Jab saya bhi na raha toh bacha kya?

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  9. Bahut dino baad yaha se guzri.. aur ek bar fir aapki kavita dil ko bha gayi...

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  10. Sayaa bhi roshni mein hi saat deta hai. Teek hi kahaa logon ne ki sukh ke kayi saathi, dhukh mein na koi - sayaa bhi nahin!

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  11. Amit, very sad but reflective of how we all feel sometime or the other

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  12. wah Amitji, dil ko chhu gayi shayri :)

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  13. गज़ब के शब्द अमित जी !

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  14. heart touching words -Amit ji

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  15. बहुत सुंदर पंक्तियाँ.

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  16. Sometimes every one feels like this!

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  17. Emotions at their best, you have a way with words :)

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  18. Isolation is the bane of urban survival...

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