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Sunday, 13 September 2015

चुभन



                           उफ़.. फिर से
                          जाग उठी चुभन
                            दबाई तो थी

                       

54 comments:

  1. Khoob! Abh kaante se phool ugana seekhna padega :)

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  2. Uff...jaise ki ishq hai yeh woh aatish ghalib jo lagaye na lage aur bujhaye na bane...waise hi chubhan dabaye na bane?

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    1. Hmmmm...itna aasaan kahaan hai Indu ma'am? Thank you:)

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  4. बहुत दुखद पहलू ! सुन्दर प्रस्तुति.

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  5. multidimensional and multifaceted. I love it!

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  6. Amitji, now it - Chubhan - is accepted and part of my life

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  7. kmbakht dabaane se dabti nahin hai sir .. nasood ban rahi hai yeh chubhan

    Bikram's

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  8. Wonderful...Nature will always spring back:)

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  9. Great Lines.:)

    Cheers,
    Sriram & Krithiga

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  10. The more it is suppressed the more it hurts..lovely words Amit Ji ! :)

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  11. kiss of the Serpent ....venomous as well as intoxicating

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  12. Your haiku has a covert pleasure hidden between the lines

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