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Wednesday 2 September 2015

तोहफ़ा


ज़ख़्म हरा भी है
और गहरा भी
दिया तो था तुमने
पर है सिर्फ़ मेरा ही

45 comments:

  1. ​बहुत शानदार !!

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  2. Often true! :)
    Could relate to this.

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  3. Wow!!! Just four lines but remarkable.

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  4. sacha aashiq gham ko bhi tohfe ki taraf leta hai, wah shaandaar

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  5. सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति !

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  6. This is electrifying....what an expression of love!

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  7. wah wah... chooo gayi... :-)

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  8. sach kaha....zakhmon ko baat kar milega sukoon nahi....bohot badhiya Amitji

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  9. haanji aur Ab iska Ilaaj bhi hai sirf MERE paas :)

    Bikram's

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  10. Such amazing expression in so few words!...wonderful.... :-)

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  11. ohhh....kya baat!....beautiful !!!

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  12. Mat rakho sambhal ke,lauta do use.

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    1. Kaash ki aisa ho pataa:(
      Thank you Indu ma'am:)

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  13. Pain, longing and love with a sprinkle of beautiful writing.

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  14. A profound truth beautifully penned

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    1. When I saw the 'tohfa' I didn't expect this. But I see what you mean.
      There's so much beauty in your lines, Amit. :)

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  15. Pain is a reaction. It can never be gifted....

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