Sadly we become blind to beauty with an empty stomach.
Thank you Geetashree:)
Absolutely wonderful...Happy new year Amit jee.. :)
Thank you Nagini..same to you:)
this is beautifully written..subtlety of intellectual and spiritual life does sustain us..
Thank you Sumana:) Glad you liked:)
Amazing words !
Thank you Rajeev:)
I got lost in the last line :P :)
Your honesty is much appreciated:P Thank you Indrani:)
Well written :)
Thank you Sanaa:)
Thank you Shayar:)
absolutely beautiful... Bikram's
Thank you Bikram:)
Beautifully composed Amitji, superb lines Who feeds on cartfuls of fodder?I thrive on a pearl on an ivory palm! How does poets united work, do they give a prompt?
Yes, it is an interesting forum..you can visit them through the link under my poem on this page itself:)Thank you Shweta for liking my poem:)
Thank you Archana:)
bohoth qubsurathgood luck!
Thank you NSK:)
Love! We can stuff ourselves with junk and still hunger for one pearl.
Right! Thank you Susan:)
The parting image is captivating and strong..a powerful poem
Thank you Jae:)
Very subtle & deep!
Thank you Mary:)
A wish unfulfilled
You sure got it right Ranjana! Thank you:)
Some people get all the breaks...and some don't!
True! Thank you Magical Mystical Teacher:)
A lovely thing to focus on rather than drivel or fodder.
Yes! Thank you Moondustwriter:)
Thank you Tom sir:)
Wow! Not a placebo but a balm. :) Amitji , do you have a collection of Jamini Roy paintings, also Van Gogh, Hussain?
Thank you Somali:)..no I don't.
Thank you Rajesh:)
This poem requires pondering and rereading to get hidden meanings... Nice!
You're right Rajeev:) Thank you:)
It's such a beautiful poem Amit!All one needs is just one empathetic soul than the army of so-called friends. Personally,I'll have one pearl of a classic book rather than the whole fodder of the worldly relations and rhetorics.
Hey Kokila! You have wonderfully summed up the spirit of the poem! Kudos!Thanks tonz:):)
I especially love that closing line!
Glad you liked:) Thank you Sherry:)
One pearl is all I crave for....one good book, one good friend, one good thought, one true love, one honest smile....a beautiful poem Amit ji...and I don't know why but it reminded me of Blake's 'eternity in an hour'....
Thanks a whole lot Sunaina:) I feel flattered when kind heart readers drop big names alongside my humble work;)
Nice Amit. I share your interest may be not as lucidly but someday as soon as I am ready with a set of collection. Amal