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Wednesday, 6 January 2016

Between the Sheets


We both vulnerable
To each other
Not a stitch in defense
And who needs it?

I explore.. you elude
you oblige.. I cajole
I seek you grant
And then play pricey

Intertwined in each other
The whole night
My poem and me
Between the sheets of paper!
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59 comments:

  1. Indrani7 January 2016 at 04:09

    Nicely said. Great read.

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  2. Chaitali Bhattacharjee7 January 2016 at 06:06

    Liked the innuendos

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  3. Unknown7 January 2016 at 06:25

    wow... amazing :-) angrezi!!!!
    Btw - Amitji... i've been missing you on Drishti :-(

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  4. Rakesh7 January 2016 at 08:15

    Umm...

    ...and I thought, twists are possible only in short stories! :D

    You never cease to surprise!

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  5. Sanaa Rizvi7 January 2016 at 08:40

    Excellent write :)

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  6. vanderloost7 January 2016 at 08:51

    Intriguing undertones

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  7. Susan7 January 2016 at 10:19

    A joy, indeed!

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  8. Mary7 January 2016 at 10:23

    A joyful write!

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  9. Maniparna7 January 2016 at 13:07

    I loved the twist.... but even without the last line, it would have been a great romantic poem... :-D

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  10. Purba chakraborty7 January 2016 at 13:26

    The last para is wonderful. Beautiful poem :)

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  11. Sherry Blue Sky7 January 2016 at 21:14

    Oh I liked the surprise ending!

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  12. Unknown8 January 2016 at 04:46

    I chuckled at the unexpected ending. Nice.

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  13. Tomichan Matheikal8 January 2016 at 05:41

    Ha ha... Naughty!

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  14. C Suresh8 January 2016 at 05:54

    Aha! What a twist :)

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  15. Saru Singhal8 January 2016 at 10:53

    Ha! I was going in a different direction, but then came the twist. What you said is so true. We have that sensuous-lover-like relation with writing.

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    1. Amit Agarwal8 January 2016 at 23:22

      Thank you for attesting, Saru:) Am happy you did..

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  16. Panchali8 January 2016 at 11:28

    Lovely!! The art of being happy lies in the power of extracting happiness from common things....like poetry writing! Well done, Amit!!

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  17. Anonymous8 January 2016 at 16:33

    Interesting!

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  18. राजीव कुमार झा8 January 2016 at 18:57

    amazing words !

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  19. the little princess8 January 2016 at 22:27

    aha...love the word play...that's the best kind of romance!

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  20. Amit Agarwal8 January 2016 at 23:21

    Thank you Ranjana:)

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  21. Aapki Safalta9 January 2016 at 05:29

    Nice said.....

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  22. Uppal9 January 2016 at 06:20

    Poetry is so sensuous,it squeezes and bares the heart out. Love the symbolism!

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  23. Rajeev Moothedath9 January 2016 at 07:34

    Very inteestingly coveyed Amit-Loved it!

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  24. Alok singhal9 January 2016 at 08:43

    I love when you write in Hindi. English one here is a pleasant surprise :)

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  25. Unknown9 January 2016 at 20:10

    Last line is my favorite. :)

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  26. Unknown11 January 2016 at 04:52

    Loved the end...awesome Amitji :)

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  27. Nona11 January 2016 at 23:20

    Good one

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  28. A Homemaker's Utopia13 January 2016 at 23:37

    Loved your magic with words :)

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  29. Unknown15 January 2016 at 06:46

    This is just magical. - Main aur meri shayari.

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    1. Amit Agarwal15 January 2016 at 22:57

      'Main aur meri shayari..' yes! Thank you Somali:)

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  30. Renu Vyas4 February 2016 at 00:45

    Wow..beautiful ! :)

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  31. दिगम्बर नासवा9 February 2016 at 22:53

    Wonderful thought ...

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