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Wednesday, 6 January 2016

Between the Sheets


We both vulnerable
To each other
Not a stitch in defense
And who needs it?

I explore.. you elude
you oblige.. I cajole
I seek you grant
And then play pricey

Intertwined in each other
The whole night
My poem and me
Between the sheets of paper!

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60 comments:

  1. wow... amazing :-) angrezi!!!!
    Btw - Amitji... i've been missing you on Drishti :-(

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  2. Umm...

    ...and I thought, twists are possible only in short stories! :D

    You never cease to surprise!

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  3. I loved the twist.... but even without the last line, it would have been a great romantic poem... :-D

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  4. The last para is wonderful. Beautiful poem :)

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  5. I chuckled at the unexpected ending. Nice.

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    1. Glad you enjoyed:) Thank you Tom sir:)

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  7. Ha! I was going in a different direction, but then came the twist. What you said is so true. We have that sensuous-lover-like relation with writing.

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    1. Thank you for attesting, Saru:) Am happy you did..

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  8. Lovely!! The art of being happy lies in the power of extracting happiness from common things....like poetry writing! Well done, Amit!!

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  9. aha...love the word play...that's the best kind of romance!

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    1. Thank you Shubhangi:) Glad you liked:)

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  10. Poetry is so sensuous,it squeezes and bares the heart out. Love the symbolism!

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  11. Very inteestingly coveyed Amit-Loved it!

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  12. I love when you write in Hindi. English one here is a pleasant surprise :)

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  13. Loved the end...awesome Amitji :)

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  14. This is just magical. - Main aur meri shayari.

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    1. 'Main aur meri shayari..' yes! Thank you Somali:)

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