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Wednesday 30 December 2015

रीता


रीता ही रहा
बारिश झमाझम
उल्टा मटका

24 comments:

  1. right I am confused what does Reeta mean

    Wishing you and family and everyone around you a very happy new year .. may all that you dream come true .. have a fantabulous new year ..
    Bikram's

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    1. Ha ha:) Paa ji, I can understand your confusion;) but here it is not her..it means 'empty' in this verse:)
      Thank you sir ji and same to you ji:):)

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    2. ohh .. now it makes sense ... :) thank you

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  2. रीता पर अनछुआ नहीं , बारिश की बूंदों से भीगा बाहरी तन कुछ त्रुटियाँ तो धो गया होगा , है न अमित जी

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    1. Arre waah! Aaapne toh iss haiku ko ek bilkul nayaa aayaam de dala, Sunaina!
      I wholeheartedly surrender:)

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  3. How can you receive if you turn your back towards the bounties showered upon you by the Lord? An upturned earthen pot is also symbolic of rejection and non-receptivity.

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    1. Ji, bilkul sahi! Iss hi bhawna se likha gayaa hai ye haiku aur ye hi iss mein chitrit karne ki koshish ki gayi hai:
      Thank you Geetashree:)

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  4. This is an irony of life. Where there is abundance of something, sometimes people don't value it and become non receptive.

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    1. ...and hold responsible something/someone else!
      Thank you Somali:)

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  5. Plenty outside, nothing inside...Hope my understanding is correct.
    Love your poems Amitji

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    1. Yes, Ranjana, and basically the unwillingness to receive..if it opens up to the sky it will be filled too! Thank you for your interest:) and liking my work:)

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  6. Wow! Such depth in these few words. Love your poems, Sir :)

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  7. Good one! Even I had a confusion, thanks to your clarification! :)

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  8. I had to read a few comments above to make sense and appreciate fully. I would request to add English meanings, like you did earlier :)

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    1. Thank you Alok for your kind suggestion:) I'll do my best:) I appreciate your support:)

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  9. Wonderful. Drives in the point so pithily and so beautifully.

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  10. Rita is a new word to me too. :)
    Good one again. :)

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  11. Liked the unchua comment a lot :D

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