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Sunday, 27 December 2015

आस


रोटी खाऊँ मैं
या खा रही मुझको
रोटी की आस


38 comments:

  1. Bitter reality of our lives!

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  2. सच्ची बात
    http://savanxxx.blogspot.in

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  3. कटु किन्तु सत्य

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  4. Our desire for something consumes us more than we consume the desired object. Amitji, 'roti' in your haiku can be extended to any object of desire. Isn't it?

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    1. Exactly Somali! You got it right:) 'Roti' is just a symbol:) Thank you:)

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  5. Bahut pyara! 3 lines me jeevan ka sach.

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  6. it stabs but kills not.....ahh....the pain....

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    1. I'm humbled!
      What I said in 10 words, you said in 5.
      My effort is successful if even one single reader could feel the pain!
      Accolades to you Sunaina with a bouquet of thnkyous:):)

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    2. If you don't mind, can I use this poem for a post with due reference and link to your post?

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    3. Hey Sunaina! You don't have to ask me...it's a pleasure and an honour to be quoted by you:)

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  7. Ye 'aas' sab kuchh kha jati hai sivay 'aham' ke. Bahut khub, Amit Ji :)

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  8. शानदार अभिव्यक्ति

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  9. ohhhh that is cruel and sad I pray and wish that NO one ever has to do without Food.. and that everyone has fooood ...



    Wishing you and family and everyone around you a very happy new year.. May all that you have dreamed comes true.. have a fantabulous New year

    Bikram's

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  10. Tough choice! But what does roti represent? Just hunger or more?

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    1. Hunger definitely, but not of roti alone..althogh roti also for some!
      Thank you for your interest, Mridula:) Am obliged:)

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  11. I think both are important. Aim and ambition. Yet, aim can transcend ambition as man evolves into higher being. With age we all do as we progressively realize our limitations.

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    1. Great philosophy indeed! And true too!
      Thank you ma'am for this value addition to my humble effort:)

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    1. Glad you realized:) Thank you Priyanka:)

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  13. Aas liye ghumte hain kyonki jeene ki aas hai :)

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    1. Glad you liked, Digamber sir:) Thank you:)

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