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Tuesday, 15 December 2015

घर


भरा है घर
सामान ही सामान
कहाँ रहूँ मैं 

This post is dedicated to Geetashree Chatterjee who lambasted me for doing away with symbolism in my haiku here...I thank her for this favour!


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23 comments:

  1. rupam sarma15 December 2015 at 18:32

    So nice

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  2. vanderloost15 December 2015 at 20:59

    Honoured.

    However, I beg to submit that the comment about Haiku was a mild observation and not in the tone of a reprimand.

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    1. Amit Agarwal16 December 2015 at 00:27

      Your 'mild observation' motivated me to observe the terms of a true haiku more vigilantly, Geetashree, thank you!
      This chaste one is a result of your reminder, but I can't promise that I shall not deviate ever, not because I'm an obstinate fool, but because I like stimulus from friends:)

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    2. vanderloost16 December 2015 at 08:57

      You are a sensitive poet, sir and your beautiful creations are our inspiration. Indebted.

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  3. Mridula16 December 2015 at 02:31

    The story of every house!

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  4. Bikram16 December 2015 at 03:15

    he he he he :) NOW that is the true story in my home.. I have tooo much stuff .. need to throw more than half the things :)


    Bikram's

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  5. Ravish Mani16 December 2015 at 03:20

    Poignant

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  6. Unknown16 December 2015 at 05:40

    so true... :-)

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  7. Rakesh16 December 2015 at 08:23

    So beautiful and true!

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  8. Rajesh16 December 2015 at 09:08

    Good one.

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  9. Kokila gupta16 December 2015 at 09:14

    reality put nicely !

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  10. Rajeev Moothedath16 December 2015 at 09:26

    Superb!

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  11. Maniparna16 December 2015 at 10:55

    So true!

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  12. Purba chakraborty16 December 2015 at 12:34

    Wow! It's really so important to declutter both our room and our mind.

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  13. Indrani16 December 2015 at 16:37

    True! Every word is true!

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  14. Amit Agarwal16 December 2015 at 22:50

    Dear friends, I see that in spite of an explanation it has mostly been misunderstood for a house but I'm happy that some have reached the core too!
    This haiku is about the clutter in our minds and hearts which leaves no room for the Divine or Atman or Self to enter and reside inside us. Thank you for your support:)

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  15. Cifar16 December 2015 at 22:54

    nice and deep

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  16. Yogi Saraswat17 December 2015 at 00:51

    सटीक !!

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  17. My Unfinished Life17 December 2015 at 09:38

    Mera sara saamaan...ghar mai pada hai...

    www.myunfinishedlife.com

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  18. Saru Singhal17 December 2015 at 16:42

    Beauty of your wordplay. Splendid!

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  19. Unknown18 December 2015 at 10:27

    Thought provoking. Makes one ponder about what should one fill the upper quarter with. :)

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  20. Manisha Sharma4 January 2016 at 07:13

    कहानी घर-घर(minds and hearts)की :)

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