Bitter reality of our lives!
Thank you Uppal ma'am:)
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Thank you Savan:)
कटु किन्तु सत्य
Thank you Prasad:)
Our desire for something consumes us more than we consume the desired object. Amitji, 'roti' in your haiku can be extended to any object of desire. Isn't it?
Exactly Somali! You got it right:) 'Roti' is just a symbol:) Thank you:)
Very well said.
Thank you Rajesh:)
Bahut pyara! 3 lines me jeevan ka sach.
Thank you Rakesh:)
Very well written.
Thank you Purba:)
it stabs but kills not.....ahh....the pain....
I'm humbled!What I said in 10 words, you said in 5.My effort is successful if even one single reader could feel the pain!Accolades to you Sunaina with a bouquet of thnkyous:):)
If you don't mind, can I use this poem for a post with due reference and link to your post?
Hey Sunaina! You don't have to ask me...it's a pleasure and an honour to be quoted by you:)
Ye 'aas' sab kuchh kha jati hai sivay 'aham' ke. Bahut khub, Amit Ji :)
Thank you Ravish:)
Thank you Madhusudan:)
ohhhh that is cruel and sad I pray and wish that NO one ever has to do without Food.. and that everyone has fooood ... Wishing you and family and everyone around you a very happy new year.. May all that you have dreamed comes true.. have a fantabulous New yearBikram's
Thank you Bikram, and same to you:)
Tough choice! But what does roti represent? Just hunger or more?
Hunger definitely, but not of roti alone..althogh roti also for some!Thank you for your interest, Mridula:) Am obliged:)
I think both are important. Aim and ambition. Yet, aim can transcend ambition as man evolves into higher being. With age we all do as we progressively realize our limitations.
Great philosophy indeed! And true too!Thank you ma'am for this value addition to my humble effort:)
Three lines that mean SO much!
Glad you realized:) Thank you Priyanka:)
Thank you Rajeev:)
Aas liye ghumte hain kyonki jeene ki aas hai :)
Right sir:) Thank you Suresh:)
Behtar ulat fer ...
Glad you liked, Digamber sir:) Thank you:)