Thank you Rupam:)
Honoured. However, I beg to submit that the comment about Haiku was a mild observation and not in the tone of a reprimand.
Your 'mild observation' motivated me to observe the terms of a true haiku more vigilantly, Geetashree, thank you!This chaste one is a result of your reminder, but I can't promise that I shall not deviate ever, not because I'm an obstinate fool, but because I like stimulus from friends:)
You are a sensitive poet, sir and your beautiful creations are our inspiration. Indebted.
The story of every house!
he he he he :) NOW that is the true story in my home.. I have tooo much stuff .. need to throw more than half the things :) Bikram's
so true... :-)
So beautiful and true!
reality put nicely !
Wow! It's really so important to declutter both our room and our mind.
True! Every word is true!
Dear friends, I see that in spite of an explanation it has mostly been misunderstood for a house but I'm happy that some have reached the core too!This haiku is about the clutter in our minds and hearts which leaves no room for the Divine or Atman or Self to enter and reside inside us. Thank you for your support:)
nice and deep
Mera sara saamaan...ghar mai pada hai...www.myunfinishedlife.com
Beauty of your wordplay. Splendid!
Thought provoking. Makes one ponder about what should one fill the upper quarter with. :)
कहानी घर-घर(minds and hearts)की :)