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Saturday, 23 March 2013

अँधेरे...


चाँद - सितारे 
किसे हसीं नहीं लगते 
सूरज ज़िन्दगी 
तो दीपक रौशनी दिया करते हैं 

मेहरबाँ कुछ ऐसे 
बनाए कुदरत ने 
जो गुमनाम अंधेरों को भी 
याद किया करते हैं 


Translation:


Who doesn't find
Moon and stars alluring
The Sun gives life
And the lamps light

Existence however has
Styled some kind souls who
The ignored dark
Remember too

This verse is gratefully dedicated to blogger friends Tangy Tomato Twist, Indu Chhibber and Panchali Sengupta for their inspiration! Thanks a lot grand ladies :)



59 comments:

  1. प्रभावशाली ,
    जारी रहें।

    शुभकामना !!!

    आर्यावर्त

    आर्यावर्त में समाचार और आलेख प्रकाशन के लिए सीधे संपादक को editor.aaryaavart@gmail.com पर मेल करें।

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  2. amitji... ur poem on Dark is a glowing light..nice lines..GOD<3U

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  3. You overwhelm me with this honor Amitjee!Thanks a million.

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    1. The pleasure is all mine:) Thank you Indu for inspiring me:)

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  4. Beautiful, just like a night sky with stars :)

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  5. very beautiful poem...ur friends are lucky

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    1. Thank you Nandini:) I AM lucky:)

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  6. Beautiful lines Amitji!....gumnaam andheron me yaad karne wale dost hi to asal huwa karte hain!

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  7. bahut badhiya Amit jee . Enjoyed the lines . Thanks three ladies because of your inspirition Amit jee wrote this wonderful lines

    Travel India

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  8. Aap tho ghumnaam anderon ko bhi roshan kiya karte hain Amitji - badayi sweekaren!

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    1. Aap ki zarranawaazi hai:)
      Thank you Suresh:)

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  9. We are trained to fear darkness, little do our parents and society realise that we come out of the darkness of the womb to light. Most of us need several lifetimes to see the real light (read enlightenment).

    Hmmm....diverted from the topic.

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    1. ...you rather philosophized:) and so truly!
      Thank you Sabya:)

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  10. awesome amit..its a pleasure to come back to your blog !

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  11. Wow....It is a wonderful poem, Amit !!Beautiful dedication! Thank you for the mention! I am deeply honored, Amit!

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    1. Thank you Panchali for being the source of these lines:)

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  12. Amit ji, I think you should give English translation of what you write. I understand Hindi but not poetry!

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  13. It is done!
    Thank you Matheikal for your interest, and patronage:)

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  14. Very beautiful lines original as well as the translation

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  15. each and every line is awwsome....
    behtareen combination of emotion and words"

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  16. Absolutely beautiful!! :)

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  17. nice lines Amit ji

    un hastiyo ko salam jo gumnaam andhero ko bhi yaad kiya karte hai

    and all the three are in my friends list :))

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  18. short n lethal amitji... superb !

    http://neoimaginations.blogspot.in/

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  19. I just don't know what to say !!!!! I wish you could see me right now !!! speechless !

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    1. speechlessness says volumes!
      Thanks a lot again Tangy:)

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  20. behatreen likha hai aapne sir...

    Woh alvida ke saath waapsi ka vaada kar gaye
    Woh ek ayyaash ko lawaris, bepanah kar gaye
    Rona toh nahi chahte the hum iss judaai par
    Woh aansoon ke baandh par hi chot kar gaye

    Sir, aapki tippaniyon ka intezaar rahega mere blog par...Keep Reading

    Ankit's Vivacious Memoirs

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  21. वाह बहुत खूब! ऐसे मेहरबान चंद होते हैं, पर जब साथ होते हैं, तो अँधेरों को भी रोशन कर देते हैं। आपकी कविता बहुत अच्छी लगी।

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