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Friday, 22 March 2013

हवाएँ...

बेमानी है बहुत 
मासूम हवाओं पे 
रखना  इल्ज़ाम,
ताश के पत्तों के महल 
बसने को नहीं 
हुआ करते.


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45 comments:

  1. ANULATA RAJ NAIR22 March 2013 at 01:26

    सच....
    इसमें हवाओं का क्या कसूर...

    अनु

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  2. Hemant22 March 2013 at 01:43

    Subhanallah!!

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  3. The Young Bigmouth22 March 2013 at 02:11

    nice thought, felt like writing another stanza in continuation.

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    1. AmitAag23 March 2013 at 01:50

      Great idea! Let's read it too!!
      Thank you:)

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  4. provoqd22 March 2013 at 03:01

    Waah, Amitji, bohot khoob likha March k iss mahine k liye. Does the wind draw analogy with the condition in offices and boardrooms right now, with the financial year drawing to a close?

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog

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    1. AmitAag23 March 2013 at 01:51

      Ha ha ha:):D Far fetched!!
      Thank you Jay:)

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  5. Indrani22 March 2013 at 03:13

    Wow! Too good.
    Well told.

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  6. ekta khetan22 March 2013 at 03:13

    Very well said..taash ke mahal hji girte hai halki hawaon mein...

    warna aashiyana toh banta hai mazbooti ke liye!

    ektakhetan.blogspot.in

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  7. dr.mahendrag22 March 2013 at 03:26

    फिर भी हर रोज मैं बनाता हूँ ,ताश का एक महल क्योकि अब यह मेरी आदत बन गयी है.
    अमितजी, उम्दा प्रस्तुति हेतु बधाई

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  8. The Mukhtiars22 March 2013 at 04:59

    wah wah, bahut acche

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  9. indu chhibber22 March 2013 at 05:40

    Where have you BEEN?
    These are very pensive lines-saddening!!

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    1. AmitAag23 March 2013 at 01:57

      Busy with mundane affairs of life...
      Thank you Indu for recognizing the pathos:)

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  10. Woman'n'Beyond22 March 2013 at 06:43

    Amazing!

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  11. Panchali22 March 2013 at 07:13

    Your new photographs would tell us... where you've been hiding all this while! Missed you, amit!:)
    Hard hitting lines...very well penned!

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    1. AmitAag23 March 2013 at 02:03

      My new photos will tell you with their commonplace
      nature that I'm very much here:)
      ...just over busy:)
      Thank you Panchali for your kind, generous words:)
      (and for appreciating the verse too:))

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  12. Jayashree Srivatsan22 March 2013 at 08:13

    Very well penned. Nice lines!

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  13. Vaishali Jain22 March 2013 at 20:04

    WOW! Lovely lines!

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  14. www.lifepartneracademy.com22 March 2013 at 21:35

    Bahut Badhiya Amitji.

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  15. How do we know22 March 2013 at 22:16

    bahut khoobsoorat!

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  16. Anonymous23 March 2013 at 00:15

    I am trying to relate these lines to some sort of experience. Well very beautiful lines with lot of depth and a tinge of regret.

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    1. AmitAag23 March 2013 at 02:10

      Thank you Khushbu:) I wish you never experience this:) God bless you!

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  17. Vishal Rathod23 March 2013 at 01:26

    Sir ,

    After a long time on Indiblogger with a bang . Nice short one .

    Travel India

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    1. AmitAag23 March 2013 at 02:13

      Thank you Vishal:)
      Who knows it's a bang or an ebb...

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  18. rupam sarma23 March 2013 at 06:10

    Beautiful Amitji

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  19. Neha Sharma23 March 2013 at 11:49

    Amazing...

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  20. Geetashree Chatterjee23 March 2013 at 23:22

    Very nice

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  21. Unknown24 March 2013 at 05:41

    wow amit..am short of words, beautiful lines !

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  22. C Suresh24 March 2013 at 23:16

    Khoob Amit sahab! Shamaprarti hoon ki der se aaya!

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    1. AmitAag27 March 2013 at 21:56

      Suresh sir, aisa kah kar aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe hain! Aap ka aana hamesha khoobsurat haota hai:) Thank you:)

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  23. Unknown16 April 2014 at 00:56

    bahut khub

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