सच....इसमें हवाओं का क्या कसूर...अनु
Thank you Anu:)
Thank you Hemant:)
nice thought, felt like writing another stanza in continuation.
Great idea! Let's read it too!!Thank you:)
Waah, Amitji, bohot khoob likha March k iss mahine k liye. Does the wind draw analogy with the condition in offices and boardrooms right now, with the financial year drawing to a close?RegardsJayMy Blog
Ha ha ha:):D Far fetched!!Thank you Jay:)
Wow! Too good.Well told.
Thank you Indrani:)
Very well said..taash ke mahal hji girte hai halki hawaon mein...warna aashiyana toh banta hai mazbooti ke liye!ektakhetan.blogspot.in
Thank you Ekta:)
फिर भी हर रोज मैं बनाता हूँ ,ताश का एक महल क्योकि अब यह मेरी आदत बन गयी है. अमितजी, उम्दा प्रस्तुति हेतु बधाई
Thank you Doc:)
wah wah, bahut acche
Where have you BEEN?These are very pensive lines-saddening!!
Busy with mundane affairs of life...Thank you Indu for recognizing the pathos:)
Thank you Meenakshi:)
Your new photographs would tell us... where you've been hiding all this while! Missed you, amit!:)Hard hitting lines...very well penned!
My new photos will tell you with their commonplacenature that I'm very much here:)...just over busy:)Thank you Panchali for your kind, generous words:)(and for appreciating the verse too:))
Very well penned. Nice lines!
Thank you Jaish:)
WOW! Lovely lines!
Thank you Vaishali:)
Bahut Badhiya Amitji.
I am trying to relate these lines to some sort of experience. Well very beautiful lines with lot of depth and a tinge of regret.
Thank you Khushbu:) I wish you never experience this:) God bless you!
Sir ,After a long time on Indiblogger with a bang . Nice short one .Travel India
Thank you Vishal:)Who knows it's a bang or an ebb...
Thank you Rupam:)
Thank you Neha:)
Thank you Geeta:)
wow amit..am short of words, beautiful lines !
Thank you Alka:)
Khoob Amit sahab! Shamaprarti hoon ki der se aaya!
Suresh sir, aisa kah kar aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe hain! Aap ka aana hamesha khoobsurat haota hai:) Thank you:)
Thank you Archana:)