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Friday, 22 March 2013

हवाएँ...

बेमानी है बहुत 
मासूम हवाओं पे 
रखना  इल्ज़ाम,
ताश के पत्तों के महल 
बसने को नहीं 
हुआ करते.


46 comments:

  1. सच....
    इसमें हवाओं का क्या कसूर...

    अनु

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  2. nice thought, felt like writing another stanza in continuation.

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    1. Great idea! Let's read it too!!
      Thank you:)

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  3. Waah, Amitji, bohot khoob likha March k iss mahine k liye. Does the wind draw analogy with the condition in offices and boardrooms right now, with the financial year drawing to a close?

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog

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    1. Ha ha ha:):D Far fetched!!
      Thank you Jay:)

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  4. Very well said..taash ke mahal hji girte hai halki hawaon mein...

    warna aashiyana toh banta hai mazbooti ke liye!

    ektakhetan.blogspot.in

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  5. फिर भी हर रोज मैं बनाता हूँ ,ताश का एक महल क्योकि अब यह मेरी आदत बन गयी है.
    अमितजी, उम्दा प्रस्तुति हेतु बधाई

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  6. Where have you BEEN?
    These are very pensive lines-saddening!!

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    1. Busy with mundane affairs of life...
      Thank you Indu for recognizing the pathos:)

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  7. Your new photographs would tell us... where you've been hiding all this while! Missed you, amit!:)
    Hard hitting lines...very well penned!

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    1. My new photos will tell you with their commonplace
      nature that I'm very much here:)
      ...just over busy:)
      Thank you Panchali for your kind, generous words:)
      (and for appreciating the verse too:))

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  8. Very well penned. Nice lines!

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  9. I am trying to relate these lines to some sort of experience. Well very beautiful lines with lot of depth and a tinge of regret.

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    1. Thank you Khushbu:) I wish you never experience this:) God bless you!

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  10. Sir ,

    After a long time on Indiblogger with a bang . Nice short one .

    Travel India

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    1. Thank you Vishal:)
      Who knows it's a bang or an ebb...

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  11. wow amit..am short of words, beautiful lines !

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  12. Khoob Amit sahab! Shamaprarti hoon ki der se aaya!

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    1. Suresh sir, aisa kah kar aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe hain! Aap ka aana hamesha khoobsurat haota hai:) Thank you:)

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