Beautiful and so true, Amit Sir!
Thank you Meenakshi ma'am:)
Few effective words!
Thank you Kumar:)
beautiful lines amit ji....can feel the pain :-(happy for the credit though... hope i can "inspire" you to write something joyful too :-)regardsanu
"Our sweetest songs are those that tell of our saddest thoughts..."Thank you once again, Anu:)
Sirf sharare ko !
There you are!Thank you Indu:)
That was poignantly beautiful
Thank you Deepak:)
Thank you Monali:)
Well said Amit. As always, I enjoy your poetry.
Thank you Tulika:) I'm grateful:)
four lines and yet they speak so much !
They do na?Thank you Tangy:)
Thank you Ghazala:)
short & sweet :)
Thank you Deepa:)
Emotion packed intriguing lines!
Thank you Uppal:)
nice one Amit ji
Thank you Rajni:)
इल्म ,जवां है कितनी अजीब बात है ... उसका सारा लगाव एक अहं के पल से छु हो जाता है
Thank you Kirti:)
Thank you ds:)
Thank you Sam:)
superb Amit ji.. poignant words.. few words but dead on target.. like it
A literary piece...but, what's इल्म ?
Oh I'm honored!इल्म means realization here.Thank you Panchali:)
bahut sundar likha aapne.....:)
Thank you Renu:)
This is too good Amitji, inspiration from bloggers comments. Wonder when my comment will get the chance ;) ;) ;)Wonderfully written. :)RegardsJayhttp://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
The one inspired by you is in the draft form dear!It needs some more time as one single beach beauty would not delight you;):DThank you Jay:)
Short and Sweet, very nice Ji.
Thank you Hafeez:)
Thank you Ashish:)
Keep writing these poems. They stimulate one's mind and leave us thinking!
Thank you Shesha:) I'm delighted!
Powerful yet delicate, picturesque and beee..autiful ! I am feeling an idea forming from it.... and wonders what evoked this beautiful verse ?
Thank you Kokila:) Glad you liked:) A friend asked after my return from holidays whether life was good...and this verse happened!