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Sunday, 30 December 2012

वो चेहरा...


अजनबी शहर की बदहवास भीड़ के बीच
चेहरा   एक   नूरानी   अपना   सा   लगा,
गौर से  देखा  जो राहत  की  ख़्वाहिश  में 
तो पाया दरअसल औरों से वो जुदा न था।

 This post is gratefully dedicated to my friend C. Suresh who lovingly demanded for some of my lines! Thank you Suresh:)
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39 comments:

  1. chica31 December 2012 at 01:54

    Feliz 2013! abraços,chica

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    1. AmitAag31 December 2012 at 20:55

      Feliz Ano Novo para você Chica! Abraços ...

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  2. रजनीश के झा (Rajneesh K Jha)31 December 2012 at 03:12

    प्रभावी लेखन,
    जारी रहें,
    बधाई !!

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  3. indu chhibber31 December 2012 at 03:51

    OMG,this is unfortunate.
    Happy New Year to you.

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  4. Bikram31 December 2012 at 04:46

    Ohh.. why ..


    Happy new year to you and family and everyone around you :)
    Bikram's

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  5. Indrani31 December 2012 at 06:46

    sad...

    Wish you happiness ahead!

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  6. Vinay31 December 2012 at 06:46

    नववर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ... आशा है नया वर्ष न्याय वर्ष नव युग के रूप में जाना जायेगा।

    ब्लॉग: गुलाबी कोंपलें - जाते रहना...

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  7. Karupath31 December 2012 at 11:36

    नववर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं

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  8. Woman'n'Beyond1 January 2013 at 03:39

    True, beautiful! you can tell real from fake, that's not easy...

    A very happy new year to you and your family!

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    1. AmitAag1 January 2013 at 21:12

      Thank you Meenakshi for your understanding, appreciation and kind support! I'm grateful!
      A very happy new year to you and your family!

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  9. C Suresh8 January 2013 at 05:07

    I am indeed grateful Amit that you have acceded to my request for a few lines (Chaar laayina? :) ) and done me the honor of dedicating it to me.

    Par yeh ummeed rakta hoon ki mera chehra abhi bhi apnasa lag raha hai!

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    1. AmitAag8 January 2013 at 20:56

      You are my very own Suresh:)
      lines ke number par mat jaao dost, unki gahraai ko dekho:)
      Thanks a lot!

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    2. C Suresh8 January 2013 at 21:34

      Arre nahin, Amit - I was not commenting on how few the lines were in any sort of disappointment.

      You are aware that I hv a kinky sense of humor. Koi mashoor hasya kavi hai joh yeh 'Chaar Layina' ke madyamse vyangya karta hai. bus woh yaad aa gaya. I thought that that specific phrase may remind you of him :)

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    3. AmitAag8 January 2013 at 22:59

      ...bhai waah! kyaa khoob hindi likhte hain aap, Suresh:):)

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    4. C Suresh9 January 2013 at 04:43

      Dilli mein solah saal rehne ka kuch tho asar hone chahiye na? :)

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    5. AmitAag9 January 2013 at 22:12

      Yeah...sure!
      ..but that means you're rather modest about your Hindi:)

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  10. Deepak Kripal8 January 2013 at 23:43

    Good One again Amit ji.. the last line packs a punch to me, it answer some questions and leave something to be desired, that's where lies the beauty of it.. Superb thought..

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    1. AmitAag9 January 2013 at 22:13

      Thank you Deepak for your understanding and getting to the core!

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  11. Neha Sharma8 January 2013 at 23:49

    With just 4 lines you have summarized the reality of life.
    Each time you read it you realize something new. Loved it. :)

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    1. AmitAag9 January 2013 at 22:16

      In fact, yes!!
      There are more meanings of these lines than just one:)
      Thank you Neha for your interpretation(s)!!

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    2. Neha Sharma10 January 2013 at 23:37

      Just love the way you write. wish I could write like you some day...

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    3. AmitAag12 January 2013 at 03:00

      Thanks a lot again, Neha:)
      You'll write better than me:) god bless you!

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  12. ekta khetan9 January 2013 at 00:55

    Yehi to sachchai hai har ek chehre ki
    ki chuppi kai parchai haqi har ek chehre mein!

    Good one...

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  13. TTT9 January 2013 at 08:29

    gaur se dekho , is bheed mein ek chehara hai jiske aankhe sirk aap ko dhoondte hai ...

    lovely lines Amit ... even I was missing it very much !

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    1. AmitAag9 January 2013 at 22:20

      ..my my! bhai wah kyaa baat hai:)
      Thank you Tangy, for liking it and your kind patronage:)

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  14. provoqd10 January 2013 at 05:13

    Waah, bohot khoob Amitji.

    Who knows, shayad jaana pehchana chehra hi nikle.
    Keep it up, loved these lines. :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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  15. Anonymous10 January 2013 at 05:48

    Your pictures are really nice, Amit, but you should still exchange your camera for a pen more often.

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    1. AmitAag10 January 2013 at 20:41

      Fine sir, I'll do that!
      Thanks a lot for liking my pics too:)

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  16. AmitAag10 January 2013 at 20:42

    Thank you Mehroo:)

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  17. Shesha Chaturvedi17 January 2013 at 08:51

    Some words left us speechless unable to tell how we felt after reading them. Feelings well portrayed.

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  18. AmitAag18 January 2013 at 01:19

    Thank you Shesha:) Glad you felt and liked:)

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