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Sunday, 30 December 2012

वो चेहरा...


अजनबी शहर की बदहवास भीड़ के बीच
चेहरा   एक   नूरानी   अपना   सा   लगा,
गौर से  देखा  जो राहत  की  ख़्वाहिश  में 
तो पाया दरअसल औरों से वो जुदा था।

This post is gratefully dedicated to my friend C. Suresh who lovingly demanded for some of my lines! Thank you Suresh:)

40 comments:

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    1. Feliz Ano Novo para você Chica! Abraços ...

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  2. प्रभावी लेखन,
    जारी रहें,
    बधाई !!

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  3. OMG,this is unfortunate.
    Happy New Year to you.

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  4. Ohh.. why ..


    Happy new year to you and family and everyone around you :)
    Bikram's

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  5. नववर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ... आशा है नया वर्ष न्याय वर्ष नव युग के रूप में जाना जायेगा।

    ब्लॉग: गुलाबी कोंपलें - जाते रहना...

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  6. नववर्ष की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं

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  7. True, beautiful! you can tell real from fake, that's not easy...

    A very happy new year to you and your family!

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    1. Thank you Meenakshi for your understanding, appreciation and kind support! I'm grateful!
      A very happy new year to you and your family!

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  8. I am indeed grateful Amit that you have acceded to my request for a few lines (Chaar laayina? :) ) and done me the honor of dedicating it to me.

    Par yeh ummeed rakta hoon ki mera chehra abhi bhi apnasa lag raha hai!

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    1. You are my very own Suresh:)
      lines ke number par mat jaao dost, unki gahraai ko dekho:)
      Thanks a lot!

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    2. Arre nahin, Amit - I was not commenting on how few the lines were in any sort of disappointment.

      You are aware that I hv a kinky sense of humor. Koi mashoor hasya kavi hai joh yeh 'Chaar Layina' ke madyamse vyangya karta hai. bus woh yaad aa gaya. I thought that that specific phrase may remind you of him :)

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    3. ...bhai waah! kyaa khoob hindi likhte hain aap, Suresh:):)

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    4. Dilli mein solah saal rehne ka kuch tho asar hone chahiye na? :)

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    5. Yeah...sure!
      ..but that means you're rather modest about your Hindi:)

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  9. Good One again Amit ji.. the last line packs a punch to me, it answer some questions and leave something to be desired, that's where lies the beauty of it.. Superb thought..

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    1. Thank you Deepak for your understanding and getting to the core!

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  10. With just 4 lines you have summarized the reality of life.
    Each time you read it you realize something new. Loved it. :)

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    1. In fact, yes!!
      There are more meanings of these lines than just one:)
      Thank you Neha for your interpretation(s)!!

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    2. Just love the way you write. wish I could write like you some day...

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    3. Thanks a lot again, Neha:)
      You'll write better than me:) god bless you!

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  11. Yehi to sachchai hai har ek chehre ki
    ki chuppi kai parchai haqi har ek chehre mein!

    Good one...

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    1. Nice rejoinder:)
      Thank you Ekta:)

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  12. gaur se dekho , is bheed mein ek chehara hai jiske aankhe sirk aap ko dhoondte hai ...

    lovely lines Amit ... even I was missing it very much !

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    1. ..my my! bhai wah kyaa baat hai:)
      Thank you Tangy, for liking it and your kind patronage:)

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  13. Waah, bohot khoob Amitji.

    Who knows, shayad jaana pehchana chehra hi nikle.
    Keep it up, loved these lines. :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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  14. Your pictures are really nice, Amit, but you should still exchange your camera for a pen more often.

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    1. Fine sir, I'll do that!
      Thanks a lot for liking my pics too:)

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  15. Some words left us speechless unable to tell how we felt after reading them. Feelings well portrayed.

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  16. Thank you Shesha:) Glad you felt and liked:)

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