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Friday, 7 December 2012

शरारा...

आसमाँ पे चमकता वो शरारा 
जवाँ  दिखता  है,
उसके सीने में दबी  राख  का 
भला इल्म किसे है?


This post is dedicated to my blogger friend Anulata Raj Nair, whose comment inspired me to write it.
Thank you Anu!


46 comments:

  1. beautiful lines amit ji....
    can feel the pain :-(

    happy for the credit though...
    hope i can "inspire" you to write something joyful too :-)
    regards
    anu

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    1. "Our sweetest songs are those that tell of our saddest thoughts..."
      Thank you once again, Anu:)

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  2. That was poignantly beautiful

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  3. Well said Amit. As always, I enjoy your poetry.

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  4. four lines and yet they speak so much !

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  5. Emotion packed intriguing lines!

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  6. इल्म ,जवां है कितनी अजीब बात है ... उसका सारा लगाव एक अहं के पल से छु हो जाता है

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  7. superb Amit ji..

    poignant words.. few words but dead on target.. like it

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  8. A literary piece...but, what's इल्म ?

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    1. Oh I'm honored!
      इल्म means realization here.
      Thank you Panchali:)

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  9. This is too good Amitji, inspiration from bloggers comments. Wonder when my comment will get the chance ;) ;) ;)

    Wonderfully written. :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. The one inspired by you is in the draft form dear!
      It needs some more time as one single beach beauty would not delight you;):D
      Thank you Jay:)

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  10. Keep writing these poems. They stimulate one's mind and leave us thinking!

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    1. Thank you Shesha:) I'm delighted!

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  11. Powerful yet delicate, picturesque and beee..autiful ! I am feeling an idea forming from it.... and wonders what evoked this beautiful verse ?

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  12. Thank you Kokila:) Glad you liked:)
    A friend asked after my return from holidays whether life was good...and this verse happened!

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