Our desire for something consumes us more than we consume the desired object. Amitji, 'roti' in your haiku can be extended to any object of desire. Isn't it?
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I think both are important. Aim and ambition. Yet, aim can transcend ambition as man evolves into higher being. With age we all do as we progressively realize our limitations.
Bitter reality of our lives!
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DeleteOur desire for something consumes us more than we consume the desired object. Amitji, 'roti' in your haiku can be extended to any object of desire. Isn't it?
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My effort is successful if even one single reader could feel the pain!
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DeleteTough choice! But what does roti represent? Just hunger or more?
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I think both are important. Aim and ambition. Yet, aim can transcend ambition as man evolves into higher being. With age we all do as we progressively realize our limitations.
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