उनके मिलने
की
ख़ुशी मुझे
कम
ज़्यादा है शायद ग़म,
इन्तेज़ार में मीठा
सा एक दर्द
और बड़ा ही
हसीं था
भरम!
Refuge deceitful...
Is it bliss or misery
post our rendezvous..
Perhaps the aching
wait
promising a rapture
celestial
was dearer to live on
as a refuge!
Wow! This is brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteSignature Amit ji verse.
ReplyDeleteI so agree, that the aching wait is many a times dearer. But then it's only a refuge.
Brilliant as always
Anupam dear, your pampering comments are really encouraging for my style! Thanks a lot:)
DeleteMmmm! Hope you are not saying 'Kya apna tamanna thi, kya saamne aaya hai" :)
ReplyDelete..but I'm afraid this exactly is what I'm saying:)
DeleteThank you Suresh for reading between the lines:)
beautiful amit ji...............
ReplyDeleteloved it...
loved it very much.....
regards
anu
awesome one sir :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinisha:)
DeleteWow..yes sometimes happens ...
ReplyDeleteThank you Ranjana:)
DeleteI simply want to tell you that I am all new to blogging and honestly loved this web page. Very likely I’m going to bookmark your blog post . You definitely have remarkable stories. Thanks a bunch for sharing your web page.
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ReplyDeleteAmit ji
kavita bhaut hi goodh matlab rakhti hai lekin ye bhi sach hai intezaar ka meetha ehsaas alag hi mazaa deta hai
nice one
Thank you Rajni:)
DeleteOMG ..how beautifully you have woven the emotions into words...loved it!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Odyzz:)
DeleteSuperb as always, Amit, and no one says or writes it better! You have indeed woven the emotions into words!! Thanks for sharing the beauty!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sylvia:) Glad you liked:) Hope the translation helped:)
DeleteTrue enough..and very brilliantly conveyed :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajnish:)
DeleteWOW Beautiful sentiment:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepa:)
Deletevery cool, sir
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinay:)
DeleteThat was worth reading. Great writing, Sir..!
ReplyDeleteThank you Samyyyr:)
DeleteYour short n sweet verses are virtual powerhouses.The reality sometimes fails to measure up to expectations.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indu:)
Deletepowerful words indeed!
ReplyDeleteThank you Titli:)
DeleteOne of the interesting paradoxes of life: bliss or misery in waiting for the celestial rapture that will come eventually!
ReplyDeleteThank you Matheikal:)
Deletetrue amit sir, we wait wait and wait and when we the moment is finally gone we dont know
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Thank you Bikram:)
DeleteBeautiful! So true, sometimes the whole process is waiting is so amazing!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rachna:)
DeleteWaiting has its own charm, I agree :)Your verse is a gentle tug...
ReplyDeleteThank you Ilakshee:)
Deleteawesome lines amit !
ReplyDeleteThank you Alka:)
DeleteLines penned down beautifully Amitji :)
ReplyDeleteI can connect to the bhram or deception part, recently did a take on that.
So, who's the inspiration behind this post? :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
YOU! :D Thank you Jay:) Cheers! Smile man!
DeleteAnti-climax! at least there was mystery in the waiting, right?
ReplyDeleteRight! Thank you Zephyr:)
DeleteYour words have a deeper meaning. Kuch na kah kar bhi bahut kuch kahne ka andaaz hai aap me :D
ReplyDelete..iss andaaz ko pahchaan sakne ke liye aapka bahut-bahut shukriya Ghazala:)
DeleteA very expressive short poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Uppal:)
DeleteIntezaar has its own story...right :-) very nice verse
ReplyDeleteRight! Thank you Nibedita:)
DeleteWow! very interesting...it happens in life! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali:)
DeleteBeautifully done! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nikita:)
DeleteAmit ji Nice Picture, and Exceptional words, I think I can relate to it somewhat. The words are still ringing in my head.
ReplyDeleteIt gives me immense pleasure when friends relate 'to something' through my poems!
DeleteThanks a lot, Khushbu:)