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Monday, 8 October 2012

कभी ख़ुशी कभी ग़म...


उनके   मिलने  की
ख़ुशी   मुझे    कम 
ज़्यादा है शायद ग़म,
इन्तेज़ार   में  मीठा
सा    एक     दर्द
और     बड़ा    ही   
हसीं   था    भरम!

Refuge deceitful...

Is it bliss or misery
post our rendezvous..
Perhaps the aching wait
promising a rapture celestial
was dearer to live on
as a refuge!

58 comments:

  1. Signature Amit ji verse.

    I so agree, that the aching wait is many a times dearer. But then it's only a refuge.

    Brilliant as always

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    1. Anupam dear, your pampering comments are really encouraging for my style! Thanks a lot:)

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  2. Mmmm! Hope you are not saying 'Kya apna tamanna thi, kya saamne aaya hai" :)

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    1. ..but I'm afraid this exactly is what I'm saying:)
      Thank you Suresh for reading between the lines:)

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  3. beautiful amit ji...............

    loved it...
    loved it very much.....

    regards
    anu

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  4. I simply want to tell you that I am all new to blogging and honestly loved this web page. Very likely I’m going to bookmark your blog post . You definitely have remarkable stories. Thanks a bunch for sharing your web page.

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  5. Amit ji

    kavita bhaut hi goodh matlab rakhti hai lekin ye bhi sach hai intezaar ka meetha ehsaas alag hi mazaa deta hai

    nice one

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  6. OMG ..how beautifully you have woven the emotions into words...loved it!!

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  7. Superb as always, Amit, and no one says or writes it better! You have indeed woven the emotions into words!! Thanks for sharing the beauty!

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    1. Thank you Sylvia:) Glad you liked:) Hope the translation helped:)

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  8. True enough..and very brilliantly conveyed :)

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  9. That was worth reading. Great writing, Sir..!

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  10. Your short n sweet verses are virtual powerhouses.The reality sometimes fails to measure up to expectations.

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  11. One of the interesting paradoxes of life: bliss or misery in waiting for the celestial rapture that will come eventually!

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  12. true amit sir, we wait wait and wait and when we the moment is finally gone we dont know

    Bikram's

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  13. Beautiful! So true, sometimes the whole process is waiting is so amazing!

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  14. Waiting has its own charm, I agree :)Your verse is a gentle tug...

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  15. Lines penned down beautifully Amitji :)
    I can connect to the bhram or deception part, recently did a take on that.
    So, who's the inspiration behind this post? :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. YOU! :D Thank you Jay:) Cheers! Smile man!

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  16. Anti-climax! at least there was mystery in the waiting, right?

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  17. Your words have a deeper meaning. Kuch na kah kar bhi bahut kuch kahne ka andaaz hai aap me :D

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    1. ..iss andaaz ko pahchaan sakne ke liye aapka bahut-bahut shukriya Ghazala:)

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  18. A very expressive short poem.

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  19. Intezaar has its own story...right :-) very nice verse

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  20. Wow! very interesting...it happens in life! :)

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  21. Amit ji Nice Picture, and Exceptional words, I think I can relate to it somewhat. The words are still ringing in my head.

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    1. It gives me immense pleasure when friends relate 'to something' through my poems!
      Thanks a lot, Khushbu:)

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