jaati zindagi ko rok lo,ho sake to lamho ko ji loYeh na aayegi dobaraaur iska yun hi gujar jana nahi hai gawara!
Nice rejoinder! Thank you Ekta:)
So true - time seems to speed up the older I get.
Yes, exactly! Thank you Ladyfi:)
कभी तो फुहार भी बरसती होगी ? सुंदर प्रस्तुति
"उम्र यूँ ही तमाम होती है"याद है ना? धन्यवाद संगीता:)
hmm well but it depends on us , if we want to change we can .. no one else is going to come ot change it so all in our hands .. come here for a visit sir, I promise it wont be like that for as long as you stay .. Bikram's
So sweet of you Bikram! I don't know when but whenever I come there meeting you would be on top of my itinerary:) Thank you Bikram for your kindness:)
Hi Amit!Sometimes when we're busy with daily life, doing the same things everyday, life seems just to move on like that no matter what.
So true! Welcome here Zunnur:) Thank you:)
Subah hoti hai,shaam hoti hai,Zindagi yunhee,tamaam hoti hai.
Beautiful rejoinder! Thank you Indu:)
ज़िन्दगी बड़ी खिलाड़ी है...एक रोज किसी उदास शाम और परेशान दिन में...तोहफा देगी (सरप्राइज़ गिफ्ट)कोई एक पोटली...खुशियों से भरी :-)सादरअनु
मिल गया सरप्राइज़ गिफ़्ट! इतने दिनों बाद आपका कमेन्ट पा कर:)Thank you Anu:)
yeh zindagi baadi zalim hein babu mosai :D....... :)
..but still I hate tears babu moshai:)Thank you Saikat:)
Very true :-) - though only sometimes!
Thank you Savita for agreeing if only partially:)I'm still happy:)Thank you for liking too:)
I do agree with Ladyfi -- the older I get the faster it flies and at my age now that speed is close to the speed of sound -- or faster! Hope your week is going well, Amit!!
Senior friends like you are a motivational inspiration to me dear Sylvia! You are still so active and spread happiness all around you:)I'm blessed to be in your generous circle:) May God give you a long, long life, the society needs you:) Thank you:)
Thank you Ranjana:)
So true ...This is life...
Thank you Odyzz:)
:-) कमाल की लाइन्स लिखी है अमित जी...
बहुत शुक्रिया शाह नवाज़:)
nice one.. :)Zindagi koi kaha kaid kar sakte hai,zindagi nahi jati, to yaadein kaha se ati..
Nice rejoinder!Thank you Sravanth:)
i agree ...time just flies by now days .
Thank you Tangy, for agreeing:)
more essence in Hindi version.Love the lines.
Hindi is the original one!Thank you Indrani:)
Lovely, Amit ji
Thank you Anupam:)
So true. I definitely liked the Hindi version better! So much truth in those lines, so impactful. We keep cribbing and wanting and desiring and moving between choices and decisions we never realize how life gets away - goes by so fast!
Yes, exactly!Thank you Deepa:)
Good one Amitji :)Itna kyun twitchy and stressed ho rahe hai days? Kuch lete kyun nahi :) :) :)RegardsJayhttp://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
lene ke baad ye haal hai, socho toh bina liye kaisa raha hoga! ;):DThank you Jay :):)
Simple Yet Elegant!
Thank you Samyyyr, for taking note of elegance!PS: I like that triple y:)
This is it..how true, amit!
Thank you Panchali:)
And before you know it life has passed by?
yes, it is slipping away tip toed!Thank you Deepak:)
I am just scared of one thing, life shouldn't end before teaching me its purpose...waiting.......
Don't worry even if it does. Everything is predestined..will come our way at appropriate time. Just keep the flame burning! प्यास जगाये रखिये, लेकिन हासिल करने की कोशिश गिरा दीजिये ...कोशिशें कर कर के देख तो लिया होगा अब तक?Thank you Meenakshi:)Please come back more often:)
Short and sad...nice lines; why do dwell on sad things, why not the simple and lil pleasures of life?I am trying on that :)
Thank you Deepa for the very sweet advice:)Wish I were an artist of your cadre..:):)
Short, precise and perfectly true... Life indeed is a restless quest for something we don't yet know if we want!
...and that quest for 'something' keeps us burning:) Thank you Surya! Please do come here more often:)
The Hindi version stands out. :)Beautifully put together, as always.
Thank you Divya:)
The Hindi one was way stronger! A little melancholic, don't you think? But very nice..
Yeah..it's all melancholy inside out, upside down,and it was meant to be like that! Thank you Nirvana for reading between the lines:)
I have read long poems, short shayaris but what you write is Kavita-yaris!! I simply love reading it. Ap simple or shorts words me sab kuch bol dete ho. i am hooked!!
:) 'kavita-yaris'...you have coined a word for my poems:) Thanks a lot:)I'm hooked too by so many thingies on your blog:)
Kya baat hai !!bahut khoob !!Bahut hi gambhir abhivyakti !!!Happy Blogging !!!
Thank you Ankit:)
that's what i call Amit Agarwal special. only person who can come up with such unique verses.
Thanks a lot Deb:) I'm honored:)