ताउम्र ढूँढा किया मैं
ज़ख्मों के लिए अपने
रफ़ूगर कोई नफ़ीस,
हाय री क़िस्मत
मिल सका न इक
फूहड़ पैबन्दकार भी!
Translation:
Darner...
I kept looking for
a fine darner for my wounds
all my life,
was it not sheer bad luck
I couldn’t find
a sloppy patch maker even?
symbolic one ...nice one .just like your pen-name aag
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha...thank you Gunjan for sensing 'aag' in it:)
Deletebrilliant ...
ReplyDeleteThank you dear:)
DeleteSad and touching :)
ReplyDeleteYou have great command over urdu /hindi language ~
...I'm an humble learner..glad you liked:)
DeleteThank you Ghazala:)
बहुत खूब .... दर्द को सीने के लिए रफूगर भी खुद ही बनना पड़ता है ।
ReplyDeleteThank you Sangeeta:) Theek kahaa aapne...
Deletenice...love it
ReplyDeleteThank you Shamsud:)
Deletebahut khoob!
ReplyDeletesab kismat ka khel hai..
Thank you Kavita:)
Deleteवाह जी बढ़िया है
ReplyDeleteThank you Kajal:)
DeleteWonderful Amitji..
ReplyDeleteThank you Ranita:)
Deleteबहुत खूब अमित जी
ReplyDeleteThank you Shashi:)
DeleteHow true and how well you have said it, Amit! Hope your week is off to a great start! Enjoy!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sylvia:)
DeleteYou too!
very touching amit g... wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Anu:)
Deleteooooh that hurt .. but one day for sure it will be jsut round the corner ..
ReplyDeleteBikram's
Thank you Bikram for your good wishes:)
Deleteoozing out pain..why ??
ReplyDeleteHey Alka..YOU asking why:)
Deletebahut khoob !
ReplyDeleteThank you Vimla:)
DeleteThank you Indrajit:)
ReplyDeleteA poignant one, Amit. Beautiful imagery...
ReplyDeleteThank you Panchali:)
DeleteGreat writeup Amit Jee..:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nagini:)
Deletewow.
ReplyDeleteThank you Saad:)
DeleteToo good. loved every word of it...na mila ek bhi fuhad paibandkar bhi!
ReplyDeleteKya baat, kya baat, kya baat!
Thank you numerounity:)
Deletebtw I liked your 'Introduction' on your blog! kya baat!
waaah... kya baat hai...
ReplyDeleteThank you Shah Nawaz:)
DeleteThis one is beautiful. Really. Mujhe bahut pasand aayi. Aap Meerut ke hain.. to es hisaab se hum padosi bhi hain.. :) I am from Pallav Puram. You commented on my blog Know Andamans that you are coming to PB in Nov. Hope you have a great time here.
ReplyDeleteHey Surabhi...so glad to know more about you:)
DeleteYes, I'm scheduled for Port Blair in Nov, that's why your blog interested me more:)
Thank you for liking my poem:)
your website is good, but always try to improve it or innovate and it’ll be even better.Take it as a Suggestion
ReplyDeleteThank you for advice:)
DeleteShort yet striking one. I have always loved your poems but this one is a bit different which provides a reader the scope to interpret it in his own way
ReplyDeleteHey Arnab glad to see you here after a long time:)
DeleteThank you:)
bohot khubsoorat...
ReplyDeleteThank you Samik:)
DeleteBREVITY +PROFUNDITY-winning combination.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indu:)
DeleteYou always come up with some neat lines which would make me ponder over it for a while. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Akshay:)
DeleteWow...very nice....
ReplyDeleteThank you Ranjana:)
DeleteTough life!!
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha:):)
DeleteNicely penned! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vaishali:)
Deleteinimitable writing as always. the thought process behind your writings is what i admire most.
ReplyDeleteThank you Deb for the honor..will always miss you and your kind words until you're back..
Deleteबहुत खूब ... रफूगर नहीं मिलता आज ... तमाशबीन ही मिलते हैं ...
ReplyDeleteThank you Digambar:)
DeleteI didn't know you took such beautiful pics. I came here couple of times and always there was something written in Hindi and I left the place..sorry for being so late in repsonding..:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Latha:) glad you liked my pics:)
ReplyDeleteAs about my Hindi poems you may have also noticed that I generally provide an English translation too for non hindi friends! Welcome here and plz make it more often:)