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Sunday, 5 August 2012

ज़बरदस्ती...


संभाला बहुत, न माना, निबटना पड़ेगा 
अब  तो  सख्ती  से,
उदासी पोंछ  ही  डालो  यारों, जबरन,
मेरे दिल की तख्ती से.

Translation:
By Force...
I tried to humour it in many ways
but it wouldn’d listen
hence needs to be dealt with strictly.
Come, and wipe gloom
off the slate of my heart, friends,
forcibly and completely.

54 comments:

  1. very nice amit ji...
    i'm coming with a wiper....and why its raining so hard then???

    :-)
    regards

    anu

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    1. Ha ha ha:) thank you Anu:) I'm waiting:)
      "अब के सावन में शरारत ये मेरे साथ हुई
      मेरा घर छोड़ के कुल शहर में बरसात हुई"

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  2. Resonates with my own latest post, Amit! And what i spent thousands of words over, you have done it in so few so beautifully.

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    1. Thank you Suresh, you are too kind and generous:)

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    1. Thank you Vinay:) I'll be there soon:)

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  4. You have a great command over hindi language :)

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    1. ...आपकी दरियादिली है, वर्ना मैं भला किस क़ाबिल हूँ!
      शुक्रिया गज़ाला:)

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  5. Amit sir, aaap aa jaiye , or let me come over to you and will make sure that gloom never comes again ... promise :)


    Bikram's

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    1. Ha ha ha..I'm sure it won't be anywhere within sight when you're around:):D Thank you Bikram:)
      My invitation to you with open arms whenever you're in India:)

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  6. Dil woh Aapka hai, ab sakhti kaise karen.
    Udashi Akeli hai aur hum Do, Aaiye milkar usse laden.

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  7. Guess I should have an automated system that comments Beautiful and Wah-Wah every time you write Amitji...Every one of your poems is so exquisite and beautiful...Lovely!!!

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    1. Ha ha...but you don't need to have one or else I quit writing:) I honor your love and support dear sister:) Thank you:)

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  8. Amit,

    दिल तो बच्चा है जी --अब इतना बेरहमी भी ठीक नहीं..बहुत सुन्दर प्रयास !!

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    1. Ha ha ha...OK ma'am at your command!
      Thank you:)

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  9. Beautiful words, Amit! Thank you for sharing! Have a lovely evening!

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    1. Thank you Sylvia for appreciating!
      You too:)

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  10. just left speechless.when it come to words ,nobody handles it better than you .

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  11. Beautifully written.....very touching.

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  12. har dil ki aarzoo hai sir ki aisa koi dost ya humsafar miljaaye :) chaagaye sir aap.

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  13. Friendships are so important, and can bring such joy! I loved your poem!

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    1. Thank you Marie:) glad you liked:)

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  14. OK, that's what friends are for,tell us how to humor you.

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    1. Your kind remark has already done that:) I'm obliged:) Thank you Indu:)

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  15. Wow!
    Such a deep meaning, conveyed beautifully in a few words:)

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  16. Very Nice Amit ji..loved it

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  17. beautiful ! reminds me of something similar I had written years back in Gujarati :)

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    1. Thank you Vimla:) Let me read what you wrote plz:)

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  18. I sometimes feel that we are blessed to know and read this beautiful language Hindi.. Very nice.. Even the English translation has done the justice to the Hindi language in this work of yours :)

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    1. Thank you Sonia:) glad you liked:)

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  19. Beautiful lines..Your lines always strikes the right note..:)

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  20. I appreciate whoever can write Hindi poems... I can't and I'd want to write as wonderfully as you weave your thoughts in words.

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    1. Hey Vaishali..I'm honored..thank you!
      ..and yes, why don't you give it a try? Please do write and I shall be happy to offer my help in editing/proof reading prior to your finally publishing the post, if you allow me:)

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  21. The words, specially the hindi ones are so effortless pleasant and meaningful ! you are truly multifaceted ... impressive. :)

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  22. I'm humbled! Thank you Kokila:)

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