The world is like that, Saru ma'am!:( Glad my work touched hearts and made some angry too:) Thanks a lot for putting in more feelings here:) Happy..!:)
A mother she is and can't do that:( Don't worry, the pacemaker will be replaced after ten years if the lady survives..but the point in my poem is 'HOPE of survival' Thank you Mridula for your angry retort..proof that my words worked! Happy.!:)
बहुत खूब!
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DeleteIt would be better if you use the figures in words.
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Thank you Yogendra:)
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ReplyDeleteVery nice.. A lot has changed over the years. For one life expectancy has increased considerably...
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Deleteछोटी पर गहरी और चुभती हुयी बात ... ये आज के भौतिकतावादी समय की सचाई है ... दरकते रिश्तों की कहानी है ...
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ReplyDeleteJi, bilkul sahi! Thank you Harshita:)
DeleteThe agony and greed in this verse. It touched my heart and made me angry. Why people do that? How can you do this to your own parent?
ReplyDeleteThe world is like that, Saru ma'am!:(
DeleteGlad my work touched hearts and made some angry too:) Thanks a lot for putting in more feelings here:) Happy..!:)
That is horrible! She should disown them.
ReplyDeleteA mother she is and can't do that:(
DeleteDon't worry, the pacemaker will be replaced after ten years if the lady survives..but the point in my poem is 'HOPE of survival'
Thank you Mridula for your angry retort..proof that my words worked! Happy.!:)
Truth of life...Hope keeps everyone alive.
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