You have once again stunned me, Sunaina, with your exact interpretation...in fact I wanted to say behind the words in this haiku that crying, although more outwardly than sadness, is just an expression; while the latter is a state. Koyal toh ro kar phir se bas jaayegi par thoonth to hamesha barbaad hi rahega...koyal ka rona dikhai/sunaai deta hai lekin thoonth ki khamosh udaasi ka kyaa..? Thanks tonz for making my effort successful with your immense understanding:):)
Honored by the mention Amit ji....What leaves an indelible impression on my mind and heart is precisely poetry like this. It fills me with a strange kind of feeling...should I call it 'joy' I don't know....Maybe, as a poet you will know better what kind of feeling I am referring to....Something that makes me come alive.....I wish I could write like this too.....:)....what appears palpable to the sight affects us immediately....what is impalpable but still strongly present (like the stub's invisible pain) is what only sensitive hearts like yours can see....:)
Very nice one Amitji --- even the "Thoonth" is sad probably because
the hands that once tilled the lands and brought the earth prosperity have killed the fauna and cut the flora. and have brought in deserts so arid there is no shade the sun has burnt and the rivers that flow are acid.
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Dhanywaad Dilbag:) Aabhaar:)
Deletekaun jaane kiska dard zyada hai - koyal kahin aur ja ke aashiyana banaegi par woh ghar ghar na hoga......toonth to kahin ja bhi na paega....
ReplyDeleteYou have once again stunned me, Sunaina, with your exact interpretation...in fact I wanted to say behind the words in this haiku that crying, although more outwardly than sadness, is just an expression; while the latter is a state. Koyal toh ro kar phir se bas jaayegi par thoonth to hamesha barbaad hi rahega...koyal ka rona dikhai/sunaai deta hai lekin thoonth ki khamosh udaasi ka kyaa..?
DeleteThanks tonz for making my effort successful with your immense understanding:):)
Honored by the mention Amit ji....What leaves an indelible impression on my mind and heart is precisely poetry like this. It fills me with a strange kind of feeling...should I call it 'joy' I don't know....Maybe, as a poet you will know better what kind of feeling I am referring to....Something that makes me come alive.....I wish I could write like this too.....:)....what appears palpable to the sight affects us immediately....what is impalpable but still strongly present (like the stub's invisible pain) is what only sensitive hearts like yours can see....:)
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ReplyDeleteGlad you liked, Ravish:) Thank you:)
DeleteSounds beautiful but sorry what is the meaning of thoonth...
ReplyDeleteThoonth is the stub of a tree. Thank you Deepak sir for this demand..I have added a picture as an explanation to my text:)
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DeleteHai... How sad ;(
ReplyDeleteReally! Thank you Archana:)
DeleteBrilliant, Sir.
ReplyDeleteI guess many are sad because of wood burning. It creates a lot of pollution. Wish our government can find alternate and affordable means.
Yes, wood burning is a burning issue no doubt, and so is felling of trees in the name of development:(
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Very nice one Amitji --- even the "Thoonth" is sad probably because
ReplyDeletethe hands that once tilled the lands
and brought the earth prosperity
have killed the fauna and cut the flora.
and have brought in deserts so arid
there is no shade the sun has burnt
and the rivers that flow are acid.
Very beautiful lines, Rajni:)
DeleteThank you for this great rejoinder:)
Lovely melancholy
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Deleteइक टीस सी उठतीं है ठूँठ में भी,कोई कोयल नहीं आयेगी अब :(
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Deleteशुक्रिया मनीषा:)
beautiful poetry made even more beautiful by the discussions...Kudos Amit!
ReplyDeleteGlad you read all...I liked it! Thank you Rajeev:)
DeleteTragic!
ReplyDelete..but true! Thank you Shaivi:)
DeleteA sad sight indeed!
ReplyDeleteHai na? Thank you Mridula:)
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