sukha gulaab dard ko phir hara kar gaya.....
'sukha gulaab dard ko phir hara kar gaya..!'Waah, kyaa baat hai! Mere haiku se badhkar aapka comment! Thank you Sunaina:)
Version-2:खोली किताब हो उठा दर्द हरा सूखा गुलाब Thank you, Sunaina, for the prompt:)
kya khoob likha hai....:)
Strange how a dry flower refreshes memories.
Strange but true..many will attest:) Thank you Indu ma'am:)
Something so Gulzar-like in this verse! Great!
Honoured! Thank you Beloo:)
Very nice... Also the modified version with input from Sunaina...
Thank you Rajeev:)
Wah!Khoob (Aur khush ho raha tha ki ek baar melancholic verse nahin tha ki pehle comment hi phir wahin keench le gaya :) )
"Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought"..Thank you Suresh:)
बहुत बढ़िया हायकु।
Thank you Jyoti:)
Withered flowers do freshen up memories. :)Well written.
Thank you Indrani:)
Thank you IB:)
bahut badhia....us gulaab ki khusbhu aaj bhi taaza hain, usaki yaad aur baat aaj bhi taaza hain.
Thank you Chirag:)
beautiful and poignant.
Thank you Purba:)
Oh wow! I couldn't help smiling. You think so beautifully. :)
Glad you liked and smiled too:)Thank you Divya:)
Thank you Kishor:)
Aha! Romantic and how 😊😊
Thank you Archana:)
It is sad that modern generation will never experience this with their kindle,
True..and they will not know what they missed:(Thank you Kashif:)
Kya khub kaha hai!
Thank you Mridula:)
Wah sir ji WAH.. sookha gulab le ke aya kitni saari yaadein... beautifulBikram's
Thank you Bikram sir:)
True. Modern gen cannot experience the sookha gulab with Kindle. Beautiful thoughts in only 3 lines.
The deprived poor modern gen:(Thank you Jayant:)
dard aur yadon ka behtrin samagam---sukhe gulab se
Glad you liked:) Thank you Geeta:)
Thank you Amit:)
Refreshing memories! Some memories feel dry, but still can't forget!Nicely written
Thank you Ranjana:)