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Sunday, 20 March 2016

यादें


खोली किताब 
हो गईं ताज़ा यादें 
सूखा गुलाब 
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42 comments:

  1. sukha gulaab dard ko phir hara kar gaya.....

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    1. 'sukha gulaab dard ko phir hara kar gaya..!'
      Waah, kyaa baat hai! Mere haiku se badhkar aapka comment! Thank you Sunaina:)

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  2. Version-2:
    खोली किताब
    हो उठा दर्द हरा
    सूखा गुलाब
    Thank you, Sunaina, for the prompt:)

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  3. Strange how a dry flower refreshes memories.

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    1. Strange but true..many will attest:) Thank you Indu ma'am:)

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  4. Something so Gulzar-like in this verse! Great!

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  5. Very nice... Also the modified version with input from Sunaina...

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  6. Wah!Khoob (Aur khush ho raha tha ki ek baar melancholic verse nahin tha ki pehle comment hi phir wahin keench le gaya :) )

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    1. "Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought"..
      Thank you Suresh:)

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  7. बहुत बढ़िया हायकु।

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  8. Withered flowers do freshen up memories. :)
    Well written.

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  9. बहुत सुंदर

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  10. bahut badhia....us gulaab ki khusbhu aaj bhi taaza hain,
    usaki yaad aur baat aaj bhi taaza hain.

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  11. Oh wow! I couldn't help smiling.
    You think so beautifully. :)

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    1. Glad you liked and smiled too:)
      Thank you Divya:)

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  12. It is sad that modern generation will never experience this with their kindle,

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    1. True..and they will not know what they missed:(
      Thank you Kashif:)

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  13. Wah sir ji WAH.. sookha gulab le ke aya kitni saari yaadein... beautiful

    Bikram's

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  14. True. Modern gen cannot experience the sookha gulab with Kindle. Beautiful thoughts in only 3 lines.

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    1. The deprived poor modern gen:(
      Thank you Jayant:)

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  15. dard aur yadon ka behtrin samagam---sukhe gulab se

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  16. Refreshing memories! Some memories feel dry, but still can't forget!Nicely written

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