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Exactly! The agony of being chained in the movement all around. The traumatic helplessness of being trapped and confined in bustling motion throughout:( Thank you Somali:)
:) A sensitive person can 'listen' to the imaginary 'feeling' of an inanimate object and when they word it, the connoisseurs call them poets:):) Thank you Saru:)
Ausatan aadmi ki bhi sthiti aisi hi hai. Wah bhi apne bandhano me bandhe jivan ki behti dhara ko bebas ki tarah dekhta rehta hai. Bahut sahi chitran, Amit Ji :)
Aapne kuchh pal ke liye naav ke saath mere shabdon ke maadhyam se ekatmaktaa mahsoos ki...main abhibhoot hoon! Mujhe bhi naav ke saath ekaatm hone ka anubhav huaa tha... Thank you Shweta:)
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Deleteआपकी इस प्रस्तुति का लिंक 03 - 03 - 2016 को चर्चा मंच पर <a href="http://charchamanch.blogspot.com/2016/03/2270.html"> तनाव भरा महीना { चर्चा - 2270 } </a> में दिया जाएगा
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Dhanywaad Dr. Shastri. Aabhaar!
Deleteबहुत खूब :) मचलती धार कुछ नहीं जब तक नाव उसके संग न हो।
ReplyDeleteThank you Manisha:)
Deletemakes me think of a little child waiting for the dive of his life....:)
ReplyDeleteYes..another perspective!
DeleteThank you Sunaina:)
Ah!The pain of being tied in a chain and seeing the stream flow by.
ReplyDeleteExactly! The agony of being chained in the movement all around. The traumatic helplessness of being trapped and confined in bustling motion throughout:(
DeleteThank you Somali:)
Wah! A poet can add feelings even to an inanimate object.
ReplyDelete:) A sensitive person can 'listen' to the imaginary 'feeling' of an inanimate object and when they word it, the connoisseurs call them poets:):)
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru:)
Wonderful, Amit! Aur yeh bhi sahi kaha ki shayar wohi hai jo ghunghe bhawnawon ki awaaz bane.
ReplyDeleteThank you Suresh for liking it and your attestation too:)
DeleteSuperb!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajeev:)
DeleteMeaningful.
ReplyDeleteWell said.
Thank you Indrani:)
Deleteसुन्दर प्रस्तुति।
ReplyDeleteThank you Jyoti:)
DeleteThis is brilliant
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteAusatan aadmi ki bhi sthiti aisi hi hai. Wah bhi apne bandhano me bandhe jivan ki behti dhara ko bebas ki tarah dekhta rehta hai. Bahut sahi chitran, Amit Ji :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ravish:)
DeleteWow! Beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Purba:)
DeleteSo beautiful, Amit.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we all feel like that boat, don't we?
I feel like that boat all the time..
DeleteThank you Divya:)
हर कोई अपनी जिंदगी को इन शब्दों से "रिलेट " कर सकता है !! शानदार अभिव्यक्ति अमित जी
ReplyDeleteDhanyawaad Yogendra:)
Deleteawesome haiku
ReplyDeleteThank you Geeta:)
Deletegreat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you IB:)
DeleteI felt bebasi instantly seeing the naav and feeling the words...bohot khoob :)
ReplyDeleteAapne kuchh pal ke liye naav ke saath mere shabdon ke maadhyam se ekatmaktaa mahsoos ki...main abhibhoot hoon!
DeleteMujhe bhi naav ke saath ekaatm hone ka anubhav huaa tha...
Thank you Shweta:)
The pain of the captive is so beautifully portrayed through your lines. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked:) Thank you Sangeeta:)
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