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Saturday, 16 May 2015

तेरे इश्क़ में


ज़र्द ये चाँद 
मुब्तला इश्क़ में है
शायद तेरे 
                                                                                                      Image courtesy: Google

Approximate translation:     
pale is moon
afflicted with Your 
love perhaps

The obvious surface meaning comes without an effort, but for the deeper and real meaning please pay attention to the way “Your” is written...trust you understand J
Thanks to English language, there is no way to denote it in Hindi!

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39 comments:

  1. indu chhibber16 May 2015 at 05:18

    Thanks for the clarification,i missed it.

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  2. Manisha Sharma16 May 2015 at 05:21

    बहुत, बहुत सुदंर, हाँ मेरे इश्क में :)

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  3. डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक'16 May 2015 at 07:27

    आपकी इस प्रविष्टि् के लिंक की चर्चा कल रविवार (17-05-2015) को "धूप छाँव का मेल जिन्दगी" {चर्चा अंक - 1978} पर भी होगी।
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    सूचना देने का उद्देश्य है कि यदि किसी रचनाकार की प्रविष्टि का लिंक किसी स्थान पर लगाया जाये तो उसकी सूचना देना व्यवस्थापक का नैतिक कर्तव्य होता है।
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    हार्दिक शुभकामनाओं के साथ।
    सादर...!
    डॉ.रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक
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    1. Amit Agarwal21 May 2015 at 23:45

      बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद, डॉ. शास्त्री! आभार!

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  4. Saru Singhal16 May 2015 at 11:05

    Simply beautiful. Just love reading your work Sir.

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    1. Amit Agarwal21 May 2015 at 23:46

      I am thankful for all your favours, Saru:)

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  5. Unknown16 May 2015 at 11:39

    I am your fan! Simply divine!

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  6. Linda16 May 2015 at 18:17

    Lovely poem!

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    1. Amit Agarwal21 May 2015 at 23:48

      Thank you Linda:) Lovely to find you here:)

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  7. M S Mahawar16 May 2015 at 20:17

    Lovely!

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  8. Mridula17 May 2015 at 10:37

    Bahut Khub!

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  9. Anonymous19 May 2015 at 23:56

    wah wah, wah wah... but I must admit Amitji... it was a bit high flying... (thank god for the translation) :-p Cheers and I really hope you are at the peak of happiness these days with the release of your super-smashing book... :) best wishes from Desh and I :)

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    1. Amit Agarwal21 May 2015 at 23:51

      Thank you Archana:) Abhi 'super-smashing' nahi kah sakte...dekhte hain dost log kaisi response dete hain:)

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  10. C Suresh20 May 2015 at 04:16

    Ah! Got it from the translation too :) Lovely

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  11. magiceye20 May 2015 at 05:21

    Loved the concept! Beautifully done!

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  12. Bikramjit Singh Mann20 May 2015 at 08:46

    OH OH.. yes indeed PALE.. these days i am pale tooo :)

    Bikram's

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    1. Amit Agarwal21 May 2015 at 23:54

      Nah sir ji aap pale naa hona:) nahi toh hum sab hi pale ho jayenge:)
      Thank you boss, we love you!

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  13. Unknown20 May 2015 at 09:31

    The use of urdu makes the haiku even better. Thanks for explaining it too.

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    1. Amit Agarwal21 May 2015 at 23:55

      Thank you Somali, glad you liked the Urdu words too:)

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  14. Maniparna20 May 2015 at 14:15

    You always use your words in a brilliant manner..making the sense more beautiful... :-)

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  15. Cifar21 May 2015 at 23:03

    beautifully expressed

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  16. Tomichan Matheikal22 May 2015 at 03:37

    The moon has absorbed a lot of affliction for centuries!

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  17. Lancelot Quadras22 May 2015 at 05:00

    The translation helped..
    Like your choice of words...
    Lot of emotion in it.. :)

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  18. Uppal29 May 2015 at 00:05

    Delving into the contours of imagination!

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  19. Kokila gupta19 June 2015 at 01:37

    Words .... Beauty.. Divine .... !

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  20. Unknown3 July 2015 at 23:58

    क्या बात है बहुत खूब

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