Wednesday, 23 May 2012

F-55


A pitch dark corridor due to an unnoticed power failure.
Groping my way I hear soft panting and a huffy-puffy female voice “...coming, yeah...I’m commiinnng, oh...” .
To avoid embarrassment I speed up.
The lights come on suddenly, revealing an obese woman being pulled by a Lhasa doggy under its need for a walk.

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58 comments:

  1. Purushothaman Raju23 May 2012 at 01:02

    hahahaha

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    1. AmitAag23 May 2012 at 01:17

      Thank you Purushotham for 'coming' to my blog:) Plz make it more often:)

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  2. magiceye23 May 2012 at 01:35

    :)) anti climax!!

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  3. A Homemaker's Utopia23 May 2012 at 01:51

    Awesome...:-)

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  4. Azra Raphael23 May 2012 at 01:54

    hahaha!

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  5. indu chhibber23 May 2012 at 05:26

    Really!what a disappointment--why did the lights have to return so soon?

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    1. AmitAag23 May 2012 at 20:34

      To enable me write it:)
      Thank you Indu!

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  6. Jayashree Srivatsan23 May 2012 at 07:38

    ha ha :D

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  7. Rohini23 May 2012 at 13:33

    hahahaha!!!

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  8. Saru Singhal23 May 2012 at 16:46

    It was unexpected. With the beginning, I thought it to be a thriller. Sir, I think you should put those pictures which don't give even a slight hint to readers. You write 55 really well...

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    1. AmitAag23 May 2012 at 20:38

      Thanks a whole lot Saru! Glad that you liked it, I'm grateful...

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  9. Unknown23 May 2012 at 22:20

    haha , you and your incredible imagination ,wow !

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  10. Alcina23 May 2012 at 22:46

    That was quite a post :)
    I took to reading it many times before fully understanding it.
    Interesting post!

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    1. AmitAag23 May 2012 at 23:33

      Thanks a lot Alcina! Plz keep visiting:)

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  11. Rajesh23 May 2012 at 22:46

    Wow! very nice.

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  12. Geeta Singh24 May 2012 at 04:07

    :)) funny

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    1. AmitAag24 May 2012 at 04:56

      Thanks a lot Geeta:) It was meant to be like that:)

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  13. Bhavana24 May 2012 at 04:49

    griiiin:):) ur terrible!

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    1. AmitAag24 May 2012 at 04:59

      :):)thank you so much for the compliment(it is, for this post):)Bhavana!

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  14. D.Nambiar24 May 2012 at 10:52

    Hahahaha! Good one. :D

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  15. Elvira Lobo(Elli)24 May 2012 at 11:54

    have a look at your Surprise AmitAag....:)

    http://elli-itsmylife.blogspot.in/2012/05/versatile-award-double-treat.html

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    1. AmitAag24 May 2012 at 20:47

      Thank you so much Elvira...I'm honored! Thanks again:)

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  16. TTT24 May 2012 at 17:10

    nice one here :)

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  17. Meoww24 May 2012 at 17:54

    :) Funny one :)
    Cheers!

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  18. Anupam Patra24 May 2012 at 22:09

    Terrific

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  19. Vetirmagal24 May 2012 at 23:08

    I am not amused by word"obese" woman. !!!!
    :-(

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    1. AmitAag24 May 2012 at 23:33

      I'm sorry, but it had to be like that for the impact and justification, obviously without any ill feelings at all...hope you understand!

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  20. muni25 May 2012 at 23:47

    nice........he he he he he he he......

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  21. Bikram26 May 2012 at 02:56

    he he he he :) I like that
    Poor dog :)

    Bikram's

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  22. Maniceet Sahay26 May 2012 at 08:49

    Hilarious

    Random

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  23. Unknown26 May 2012 at 09:37

    LOL....funny indeed with anti climax......gud read :)

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  24. Mak26 May 2012 at 22:05

    was expecting more :) hehehehehhe

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  25. T F Carthick27 May 2012 at 21:52

    Ha ha ha. Cool one.

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  26. V. Khawani30 May 2012 at 01:44

    good one !

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  27. Deepak Karthik1 June 2012 at 01:36

    Awesome sire !
    loved it

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  28. Brian Miller24 August 2012 at 03:06

    haha not what you thought was coming at all...lol....funny

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  29. G-Man24 August 2012 at 07:16

    Amit...
    Oooooh, I just love a surprise!
    And I love a double entendre!
    Most excellent 55 My Friend
    Thanks for playing, please join us again, and
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

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