Tuesday 14 July 2015

her voice



                                                              She chimes faintly
                                                  In quietude of my barren heart,
                                                              And I crumble in
                                                     Hollow trenches of my soul!




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47 comments:

  1. Deeshani14 July 2015 at 09:37

    Beautifully woven lines.

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  2. Purba chakraborty14 July 2015 at 10:44

    Hollow trenches of my soul~ That's Beautiful!

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  3. Ravish Mani14 July 2015 at 11:24

    Maar dala.... Allah! Awesome, Amit! :)

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  4. Unknown14 July 2015 at 12:02

    Beautiful Amitji. Btw I wanted to tell you that Chitakte Kaachghar is on my desk. I am not reading in a go just limiting myself to 2-3 poems a day, absorbing the essence of the poems.

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    1. Amit Agarwal14 July 2015 at 17:00

      Thank you Somali! Please extend the credit to Geetashree, if you like the book, who made you read it:)

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  5. Ananya14 July 2015 at 13:07

    Nice Post..

    LBD

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  6. Unknown14 July 2015 at 16:08

    oh my Amitji... am amazed... tis awesome :)

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  7. Saru Singhal14 July 2015 at 16:26

    Ah, beauty of love and your words. :)

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  8. M S Mahawar14 July 2015 at 18:44

    Beautiful!

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  9. Uppal14 July 2015 at 19:28

    Meaningful!

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  10. C Suresh14 July 2015 at 19:57

    Lovely - memory or reality?

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    1. Amit Agarwal15 July 2015 at 03:27

      I'm blushing:) My tan won't show it though;)

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  11. rupam sarma14 July 2015 at 20:35

    Nice

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  12. Bushra Muzaffar14 July 2015 at 20:58

    mushy mushy :)

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    1. AmitAag17 July 2015 at 00:17

      ...means of your interest na:)? Thank you Bushra:)

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  13. Mridula14 July 2015 at 22:18

    I agree with Bushra! :D

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  14. vanderloost15 July 2015 at 00:09

    Very 'different' from your other haikus

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  15. D.Nambiar15 July 2015 at 00:31

    Lovely, Amit.
    The 'crumble' says a lot! (quite like going weak in the knees. ;))

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  16. Unknown15 July 2015 at 01:32

    Beautifully written every word deep and meaningful :)

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  17. Yogi Saraswat15 July 2015 at 02:50

    Each and every word is deep and meaningful.

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  18. Sri Kri15 July 2015 at 03:08

    Intense Haiku.

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  19. Shamsud Ahmed15 July 2015 at 03:45

    Beautiful...love it

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  20. indu chhibber15 July 2015 at 04:27

    Beautifully chosen words.
    But i would not give so much of power to anyone.

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    1. AmitAag17 July 2015 at 00:27

      Thank you Indu ma'am:)
      ...that's why you're better off:)

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  21. Unknown16 July 2015 at 03:50

    awesome, Thanks for sharing
    Self ebook publishing

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  22. AmitAag17 July 2015 at 00:15

    Thank you Deepak:)

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  23. Neeraj Kumar17 July 2015 at 02:12

    lovely!

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  24. Renu Vyas21 July 2015 at 10:19

    The power of love..beautiful words Amit Ji :)

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