लबरेज़ था जब, तो आते थे कई यार मश्कें लिए हुए .
प्यासा हूँ आज, तो मसरूफ़ हैं सब ही कहीं -कहीं !
Translation:
Love ?
Many used to come with pitchers full , when satiated was I.
Am thirsty today, but all are busy, somewhere or the other!
Meaning:
They used to adore, claiming to be lovers, when I
was at the prime,
All have, however, found other interests when I need them
most today!
Explanation:
This verse has although been written in first person, and
obviously on myself, but it universally applies to a man, a woman, a flowering
plant, a fruit bearing tree, a cow, a dog, a horse, and even to inanimate
objects like a car, a house or a computer!
Life is like that darlingsJ
यही तो दस्तूर है ज़माने का....
ReplyDeleteनिभाये जाना हमारा फ़र्ज़...
बहुत खूब कहा अमित जी.....
अनु
Thank you Anu:)
DeleteLovely lines. The true value of a person, thing, memory is what is left after superficialities and exchanges are stripped off. One can pine or one can move on.
ReplyDeleteThank you Subho:)
DeleteBeautifully expressed
ReplyDeleteVery nice....
ReplyDeleteThank you Ranjana:)
Deleteजो खूब बचाया था वो पास नहीं लेकिन
ReplyDeleteजो खूब लुटाया था अब भी है खजाने में
बेहतरीन प्रस्तुति ...संजय "सिफ़र"
Thank you Sanjay:)
DeleteProfound and so very true.
ReplyDeleteAwesome :-)
Thank you Gracy:)
DeleteNice read, meaningful words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Arumugam:)
Delete100 % true with every individual. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Vishal:)
Deleteprofound, true!
ReplyDeletevery well said!!
kya khoob kaha hai Amit ji.. Very true.
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak:)
DeleteBadhiya!
ReplyDeleteZindagi isika naam hai
kisike saath subah tho
kisike saath shaam hai.
Thank you Fayaz:)
DeleteAbsolutely meaningful, Amit. Wonderful couplet.
ReplyDeleteThank you Matheikal:)
Deleteyes life IS like that ! beautiful !
ReplyDeleteThank you Tangy:)
DeleteSo true Amit. Wonderfully expressed!!
ReplyDeleteLife is like Amit...fantastic write!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shams:)
DeleteSo Ironic but ture
ReplyDeleteThank you Prasad:)
DeleteProfound and poignant. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you Danyanti:)
DeleteThank you Rajneesh:)
ReplyDeleteSukh ke kayi saathi, dukh mein na koi, Amit? Touchingly written and loved seeing you back into poetry.
ReplyDeleteRight sir!
DeleteThank you:) You're welcome:)
Agree with you, Amit ji. It applies to all things in general. Such is the beauty of these lines.
ReplyDeleteThank you Vaishali for recognizing that:)
DeleteNicely expressed Amit Ji. That's life!
ReplyDeleteThank you Saurabh:)
DeleteActually members of each age group like to hob-nob with each other.When we grow old our peers too have grown & scattered or grown weak or simply disgusted with life.A few are left who circulate & help each other.Such is life.
ReplyDeleteScientific analysis of an agonizing situation..eh?
DeleteThank you Indu:)
sad but true fact ,,nice 1 as always :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Saikat:)
DeleteVery well said.....i m sure everybody can identify themselves with it.. atleast me, a housewife, can..:)
ReplyDeleteSooner or later all will!
DeleteThank you Renu:)
Very True...
ReplyDeleteThank you Mahi:)
DeleteNice lines, thanks for explaining the meaning and the perspective too.
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure, Indrani, thank you:)
DeleteThanks for all those interesting bits of poetry... I have nominated you for the Liebster award...
ReplyDeleteYou probably know the details being a frequent blogger... but if you need to be refreshed, here they are ;)
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Thanks a lot Surya:)
DeleteI'm honored and grateful:)
sahi kahaa guruji.
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