tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post6969863015686100755..comments2024-02-22T01:35:42.913-08:00Comments on Safarnaamaa... सफ़रनामा...: शहर-1AmitAaghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comBlogger52125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-65340072606935398132015-10-05T22:12:55.397-07:002015-10-05T22:12:55.397-07:00Yes, you're right! Thank you Lata:)Yes, you're right! Thank you Lata:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-6840825388648740582015-09-29T23:25:46.853-07:002015-09-29T23:25:46.853-07:00Amitji, your lines bring to mind the song from Gam...Amitji, your lines bring to mind the song from Gaman....seene mein jalan, aankhon mein toofan sa kyon hai. Similarly, I am wondering what brought the toofan to your pen here? Cruelty and kindness; both exist everywhere and both are necessary to experience to decide which path to take, no? Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00061406360950466605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-10859745542370742812015-08-10T08:18:40.739-07:002015-08-10T08:18:40.739-07:00Yes Kokila, mere shahar ke alawaa all is well here...Yes Kokila, mere shahar ke alawaa all is well here:) Thank you, take care:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-74228341146774508242015-08-08T22:34:05.617-07:002015-08-08T22:34:05.617-07:00Bahut udaasi bhari .... Ekdum sach aur niraash bhi...Bahut udaasi bhari .... Ekdum sach aur niraash bhi .. Hope all is well there ...Kokila guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14992236728883850513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-10723287066843106642015-08-07T23:47:16.038-07:002015-08-07T23:47:16.038-07:00Thank you Navin! Glad you liked:)Thank you Navin! Glad you liked:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-27248771488487548242015-08-07T23:46:27.938-07:002015-08-07T23:46:27.938-07:00Mujhe aap jaise pyaare doston mein woh murat dikha...Mujhe aap jaise pyaare doston mein woh murat dikhaai deti hai Suresh bhai...lekin aap mein se ek bhi mere shahar mein nahin rahtaa:(<br />Thank you dear:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-62768205095730319112015-08-07T23:42:31.936-07:002015-08-07T23:42:31.936-07:00Thank you bro:)Thank you bro:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-90397429218268927422015-08-07T23:42:08.044-07:002015-08-07T23:42:08.044-07:00Exactly my point, Manisha! It's been created b...Exactly my point, Manisha! It's been created by devils only that's why there are no humans or Gods there:)<br />Loved you lines:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-75445843057894421302015-08-07T20:32:12.288-07:002015-08-07T20:32:12.288-07:00WOW! Weighty words, Heavy thoughts.
It may be jus...WOW! Weighty words, Heavy thoughts. <br />It may be just a few lines, but I think you cracked it perfectly. Navin Mathewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07511402740571123013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-62650457275899947022015-08-07T05:24:35.228-07:002015-08-07T05:24:35.228-07:00Bahut hi udaas kavita hai Amit! Woh din bhi aayega...Bahut hi udaas kavita hai Amit! Woh din bhi aayega jab shilpi ki tarah aapko patthar nahin usme chupe murat hi dikhayi degaC Sureshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07447144019185253116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-58084283961620144242015-08-07T05:18:15.684-07:002015-08-07T05:18:15.684-07:00Sad one! nicely and tightly penned as usualSad one! nicely and tightly penned as usualShamsud Ahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10402062675521045468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-70473278033632314022015-08-07T04:38:23.744-07:002015-08-07T04:38:23.744-07:00तिलिस्मात छलावों का,तो राक्षस रचते हैं अमित जी :) ...तिलिस्मात छलावों का,तो राक्षस रचते हैं अमित जी :) ;) <br /><br />अपनी ख्वाहिशों की यू नुमाइश न कर<br />जो तेरा हैं वो तेरे दर पे जरूर आयगा<br />उसकी यु आजमाइश न करManisha Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926877851245985980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-3380965276434133362015-08-06T22:29:25.725-07:002015-08-06T22:29:25.725-07:00पत्थरों के शहर में पत्थर के भगवान है.....insaan bh...पत्थरों के शहर में पत्थर के भगवान है.....insaan bhi!<br />न मैं होता तो क्या होता?......ye dukh bhi na hota:) Thank you Manisha:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-14584371280886152752015-08-06T22:25:30.413-07:002015-08-06T22:25:30.413-07:00Thank you Rajesh:)Thank you Rajesh:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-5573759706437032452015-08-06T22:25:12.800-07:002015-08-06T22:25:12.800-07:00Thank you Saru:)Thank you Saru:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-60467034211999320512015-08-06T22:24:48.705-07:002015-08-06T22:24:48.705-07:00Iqbal sahab the great! Thank you Shayar:)Iqbal sahab the great! Thank you Shayar:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-78656860747570153482015-08-06T22:23:34.873-07:002015-08-06T22:23:34.873-07:00Thank you Deepa:)Thank you Deepa:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-87135995321875339712015-08-06T22:23:10.045-07:002015-08-06T22:23:10.045-07:00Thank you IB:)Thank you IB:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-59855241599979835202015-08-06T20:18:37.804-07:002015-08-06T20:18:37.804-07:00पत्थरों के शहर में पत्थर के भगवान है।
न था कुछ तो...पत्थरों के शहर में पत्थर के भगवान है।<br /><br />न था कुछ तो खुदा था<br />कुछ न होता तो खुदा होता<br />डूबोया मुझको होने ने<br />न मैं होता तो क्या होता?Manisha Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926877851245985980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-21551122117611070232015-08-06T08:41:38.242-07:002015-08-06T08:41:38.242-07:00Very realistic.Very realistic.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325697671806865458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-37761899887949285612015-08-06T07:15:40.540-07:002015-08-06T07:15:40.540-07:00Truth of life beautifully portrayed. Truth of life beautifully portrayed. Saru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-73767012155303046392015-08-06T05:34:51.625-07:002015-08-06T05:34:51.625-07:00it reminds me Iqbal's sher
ख़ुदा तो मिलते हैं...it reminds me Iqbal's sher<br /><br />ख़ुदा तो मिलते हैं इंसान ही नहीं मिलता,<br />ये चीज़ वो है जो देखि कहीं कहीं मैंने। Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-73311101873086147762015-08-06T05:07:31.787-07:002015-08-06T05:07:31.787-07:00It's a pretty sad state!(and yet true!)
Beauti...It's a pretty sad state!(and yet true!)<br />Beautifully expressed!Deepa Gopalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11120735937767070980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-61172952979912442122015-08-06T01:11:21.551-07:002015-08-06T01:11:21.551-07:00सुंदर सुंदर i b arorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17161315866262492520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-86247681311506125732015-08-06T01:04:13.136-07:002015-08-06T01:04:13.136-07:00Thank you for agreeing, Datta:)Thank you for agreeing, Datta:)Amit Agarwalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979122044199890176noreply@blogger.com