tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post318495336906368722..comments2024-02-22T01:35:42.913-08:00Comments on Safarnaamaa... सफ़रनामा...: मेरा यार..मेरा सरमायेदार...AmitAaghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-89129672466130737792012-10-08T22:09:29.121-07:002012-10-08T22:09:29.121-07:00I can so very well relate to this! Indeed the very...I can so very well relate to this! Indeed the very same emotions.<br /><br />My take on poetry as a whole<br />http://nilabose.blogspot.com/2012/09/ill-see-you-home-thoughts-on-poetry.html<br />Please check it out when you have a spare moment.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-49019795910687922672012-04-06T22:52:32.098-07:002012-04-06T22:52:32.098-07:00Thank you Neeraj!Thank you Neeraj!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-90211127421001649442012-04-05T23:48:15.801-07:002012-04-05T23:48:15.801-07:00Painful yet beautiful!Painful yet beautiful!Neeraj Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18211543969289797190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-19014182291671860332012-04-04T02:53:03.344-07:002012-04-04T02:53:03.344-07:00Thank you so much Shilpa!Thank you so much Shilpa!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-80219122318456512762012-04-04T02:51:54.108-07:002012-04-04T02:51:54.108-07:00Thank you Shesha, for like minded(hearted)reminisc...Thank you Shesha, for like minded(hearted)reminiscence, and your appreciation!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-81119480910287841612012-04-04T01:24:08.687-07:002012-04-04T01:24:08.687-07:00बहुत अच्छी पंक्तियाँ लिखी हैं | निम्नलिखित हिस्सा ...बहुत अच्छी पंक्तियाँ लिखी हैं | निम्नलिखित हिस्सा तो बहुत ही अच्छा लगा:<br /><br /><b>तुम्हारे जाने से<br />यूँ लगता है जैसे<br />मैं सड़क पर नंगा हूँ,<br />मेरा दोस्त, मेरा साथी, मेरा सरमायेदार<br />छोड़ गया है मुझे,<br />औ' कोयल को<br />जो भी तुम्हे बहुत याद करेगी.</b>The 4-feet Wonderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04814631314925956398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-75436197525667554842012-04-04T00:33:39.801-07:002012-04-04T00:33:39.801-07:00when i was a child, we had a big house where there...when i was a child, we had a big house where there were loads of trees along with a Mango one and a few bel (wood-apple tree and few more. We had a playful time there. While leaving that house, the new owners cut those trees. And it left me feeling bad.<br />Very well expressed. :)Shesha Chaturvedihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14602714942699492851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-37356050787530170702012-04-03T23:15:34.806-07:002012-04-03T23:15:34.806-07:00Thank you Trupti!Thank you Trupti!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-90452051693013360372012-04-03T23:14:57.242-07:002012-04-03T23:14:57.242-07:00Thanks a whole lot Shamsud for your generous words...Thanks a whole lot Shamsud for your generous words.<br />I'm grateful!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-42609973393179293272012-04-03T23:04:44.020-07:002012-04-03T23:04:44.020-07:00Lovely!Lovely!Coralhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18360367288330292186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-14741791519385265632012-04-03T22:54:59.110-07:002012-04-03T22:54:59.110-07:00Amit...you are a fine poet. I love your style.Amit...you are a fine poet. I love your style.Shamsud Ahmedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10402062675521045468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-89813898529999930512012-04-03T21:40:52.516-07:002012-04-03T21:40:52.516-07:00Thank you Seema!Thank you Seema!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-35398771310992347672012-04-03T21:40:22.119-07:002012-04-03T21:40:22.119-07:00Thank you D.Nambiar!Thank you D.Nambiar!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-81904594277568146672012-04-03T21:39:45.463-07:002012-04-03T21:39:45.463-07:00Thank you Valli!Thank you Valli!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-69981244511731182032012-04-03T21:27:13.167-07:002012-04-03T21:27:13.167-07:00very simple and beautifulvery simple and beautifulSeemahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14220982789860938571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-13054933715844834652012-04-03T16:57:54.571-07:002012-04-03T16:57:54.571-07:00Painful, yet beautiful. I was not very familiar wi...Painful, yet beautiful. I was not very familiar with a few words in the Hindi version. Wasn't I delighted to the meanings in the English one! ;)D.Nambiarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14567504529129900396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-29042922279038580832012-04-03T08:28:52.606-07:002012-04-03T08:28:52.606-07:00Beautiful poem......Mango tree is what a natural s...Beautiful poem......Mango tree is what a natural shelter....Sad that it's cut off!⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺https://www.blogger.com/profile/02666564014180302696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-37780821985939444102012-04-03T03:23:19.404-07:002012-04-03T03:23:19.404-07:00Thank you Sudha!Thank you Sudha!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-8753992892935305012012-04-03T03:00:18.984-07:002012-04-03T03:00:18.984-07:00Nice expression....Nice expression....Sudha Agarwal Rungtahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08251293259001844710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-91708288683272891282012-04-03T02:22:22.256-07:002012-04-03T02:22:22.256-07:00Thanks tons Jaish for recognizing and calling the ...Thanks tons Jaish for recognizing and calling the translation "Twin Poetry". I'm delighted! Thanks again!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-84344089112689420262012-04-03T02:01:05.800-07:002012-04-03T02:01:05.800-07:00Twin Poetry! Awesome!Twin Poetry! Awesome!Jayashree Srivatsanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07187741357853447742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-21889023819968953652012-04-02T21:06:27.143-07:002012-04-02T21:06:27.143-07:00Thanks a whole lot Kitty!Thanks a whole lot Kitty!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-33382513082648539942012-04-02T21:05:48.246-07:002012-04-02T21:05:48.246-07:00Thank you so much Latha!Thank you so much Latha!AmitAaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691653942870794293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-9730902708999340342012-04-02T11:31:41.448-07:002012-04-02T11:31:41.448-07:00There is a smooth flow of memories...mixed emotion...There is a smooth flow of memories...mixed emotions - attachment n pain of missing..Very nice~ :)Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07761042345406673308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-206220237807202014.post-26073021550435228662012-04-02T10:30:33.307-07:002012-04-02T10:30:33.307-07:00"I feel so vulnerable
in your absence
as if
I..."I feel so vulnerable<br />in your absence<br />as if<br />I'm naked in public." .. <br /><br />speechlessSATYA LAKSHMIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02491989518064580918noreply@blogger.com